darlan Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Guys I never quite appeared in the forum, today I changed my IDED. I will post my new cards here ... Any mistakes let me know and sorry for bad english =X These are the cards:Lore: To active this card you need pay 1000 Life Points OR discart the top 3 card from your Deck. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kyuu Nimchuse". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Lore: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Magic Card, "Sacfrifice to Darkness Lord". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. This card cannot by destroyed by effects of Monster cards. The ATK and the DEF of this card is the number of DARK monster in your Graveyard X1000. The owner of this card receives half the damage the opponent receives the Damage Step. If there is already a card with this image I'm sorry because I found it on Google ... and not know any of this picture (or not remember) xDComplicated name U.U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 grammer is a bit bad and teh ritual monster maybe change it to x500 and the attack and defence shoudl show ? and ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darlan Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 thanks... :X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 i think the second image is one from a real card^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psycho_juggalo354 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 THese are good cards. The pic for the first one fits the title very well.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 change demon to fiend type, and *1000 is way too much, at the very most it should be *700 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 The pic from the second card is already a card, it's Doomkaiser Dragon, a synchro zombie dragon. Its Oped, fix it into *800 or *700. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacobill123 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 and instead of 0000, have ? instead. i like doomkaiser dragon pic. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Pictures are nice. Effects are lacking. Grammar and OCG is off.Overall ok for a new creator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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