Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Hi.i'm new and wanted to post my very first card.It's called Super Neos: If you want post your own Neos cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Could you post the actual card? It would greatly helpOCG errors and the pic is bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Attachments are not allowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Erm.Sorry.I din't knew it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Its fine. Need help posting it normally? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Ok after you creat your card press the generate button. Once your card shows up click it and a code will pop up under it. Copy that code, make a thread and then paste the code in there and you've got it. Example: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I think i got it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Yep!Now I can rate it properly. Its OCG (Official Card Grammar) is totally off. It seems balanced enough. However not all of the results will be divisable by 3 so change it perhaps to halve instead? Over all its not a very good card but its your first so you'll get better. Its really a good starter card and its got a good effect but it just needs work ^^ Honest rate: 2/10but I know it'll get better with practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I toght that dividing by 2 he would get way too strong,but,by 2 were my first toght(could you say if i write something worng because im brazilian)last try*toght_tought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Oh! ^^ Of course!Here can you please post the cards effect? That makes it easier on me when correcting it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 "Elemental Hero Neos"+1 DARK monster with 2000 or less ATK points.A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion-material monsters.This card original ATK are equal to sum of the ATK of the Fusion-material monsters divided by 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Your OCG needs fixing to tell the truth, the pic is unusual. However good attempt for a beginner. 4.5/10 Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 /\ got it.I'll try to fix the OCG in other cards.not avery good image.sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 the picture looks unimpressive, and the OCG is way off. But I agree with LLD, just give it more practice and you'll get it I'll give you a 4.5/10 for this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 good for a beginer............... because your new...6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hero Neos Wiseman Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, send 5 Monster cards from your Deck to Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, all monsters in your Grveyard are WATER monsters.This card original ATK points are equal to number of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 this one's effect is still a little on the plain side, it does look relatively balanced though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Pretty good card, but a little bit Oped for a LVL 4 monster. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG needs work. Pic is good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elesis User Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Hello I am new here and I created some cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 You need to fix your OCG, I see a lot of errors, but of course your a newbie so this is expected so don't worry. Also you should've made your own thread instead of going here. Your pics need a background. Also Lass Grand Chase should be a LVL 8 instead of 12. 7.5/10 Good luck in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elesis User Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Thank's and i'm sorry, i'm brazilian ^^ I researched certain words google translatorI can teach Portuguese to someone if they want ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elesis User Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 "Elemental Hero Neos" + "Blue Eyes White Dragon". This card cannot by Normal Summon or Special Summon except by Fusion Summon. The ATK this card is equal the number of spell and traps cards continuos face-up on the field of your opponent by 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Some errors in your text and OCG, plus this card is probably pretty weak if there aren't any face-up contiuous Spells or Traps on the field so you should have an already set amount of ATK. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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