FѮAʀ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 [align=center] Very simple effect. I just wanted to make sure I had the OCG right. I'm mostly looking at capitalization's as I sometimes forget. Hope you all like it, and I'm always open to suggestions.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG fix:This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. When this card is Special Summoned select 1 monster your opponent controls and remove it from play for 3 turns. BTW you forgot the credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Wow. This is very good for a new member. OCG is all good. Only a few minor errors. 1st it should be "Machine-Type" when you put types in a card put a dash in the middle. And "your opponent's field" is old OCG. New OCG puts simply, "your opponent controls." Also, even if you doo put field it should not be cap. You may want to specify on the removal effect. For example put "Special Summon that card to your opponent's field during your opponent's 3rd Standby Phase after it was removed." Overall balanced. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Simple. Effective. Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 a little bit like Lightforce Sword's effect, I like it 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FѮAʀ Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 It was my understanding that I didn't have to give credit, and that if the owner complained it would just be taken down. If I misunderstood please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 It was my understanding that I didn't have to give credit' date=' and that if the owner complained it would just be taken down. If I misunderstood please let me know.[/quote'] Yes, you are misunderstood. If the person who owns the pic says that you have to give credit on their thread, then you have to give credit. If you don't, the person can warn you if they're nice, neg you, and/or report you to a mod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 ok lets see. Pic is great. Give Credit to Wanderley for it. Effect is effective but is OPed which was metioned by C-2. OCG with fix will be perfect Good for your first. ~8/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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