Geneth Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 This is my first set, so Apologies in advanced for OP/crappy cards. Any corrections or constructive criticism is welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 half the card effects are bland or OPed or both, along with major OCG errors (use OCG thread to help you on it) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 wow, if these are your first cards, then you are excellent! :) Pet Raven: cool, but I think you should add more, like maybe increase the strength or related cards of something.Picture is okay, but you should usually aim for an animeish sort of style. change pet raven's effect to this:You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by discarding 1 card, if you control a "Raven" monster. Blessing:awesome picture, effect is fair and has a fair cost. Dimming Hope is a bit bland, and the cost is unnecessary. If you hadn't noticed, people here seem to like complicated effects, so I would add some other effect. Great picture though. :) Enchantress: Fair effect, fair cost. However, I would add some other effect, like some ability to summon a raven. Summoner: i would make the effect so you can summon the raven from your hand or graveyard, and have some ability so you can tribute a raven to do something, maybe burn your opponent. last 3 are all okay, last one is a bit bland. Excellent work! However, for your future sets, you should probably make a theme, like tributing a raven, or something like that, and bonuses. For example, you could make this set focus on Special Summoning and Tributing pet ravens to destroy cards, burn, heal, draw, etc etc. That, and you could make spells and traps to give you bonuses when you tribute. Good luck! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG Fixes Pet Raven If you control a face-up "Lord Raven", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Change to Winged Beast-Type. Blessing of the Raven Equip only to a "Raven" monster, except "Pet Raven". Once per turn, you can skip your Draw Phase. If you do, the equipped monster can attack twice during your Battle Phase. Dimming Hope Equip only to a monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, during your End Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points for the equipped monster to lose 500 ATK. If the equipped monster's ATK is reduced to 0 by this effect, destroy this card and the equipped monster. Raven Enchantress While you control a face-up "Pet Raven", your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 face-up "Pet Raven" you control to destroy 1 Level 6 or lower monster your opponent controls. Level limit introduced to give balance. Also, decrease DEF to 1200. Raven Summoner When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Pet Raven" from your Deck. If you do, pay 750 Life Points. This card gains 300 ATK for each face-up "Pet Raven" you control. Raven Queen While you control a face-up "Raven King", your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Pet Raven" from your Graveyard. Effect limited for balance/ Raven King This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 "Raven" monsters you control. While "Raven Queen" is face-up on the field, this card gains 300 ATK for each face-up "Raven" monster you control. During your End Phase, you can Tribute 2 "Raven" monsters you control to Special Summon 1 "Lord Raven" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. Effect changed to balance it out. Lord Raven This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Raven King". You can negate the effect of Spell and Trap Cards that designate this card. Effect changed since the original was underpowered. Change to Winged Beast-Type. Overall, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChrisGate7 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 A lot of OCG errors and a somewhat bland and OP effects 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Cool pics, but I still have to give you a 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geneth Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 MagicKid777: Thank for the advice! I like how you didn't outright bash my cards just because as the other people said "They're bland and OP." you went individually, and made remarks on most of them. For this, I thank you. Max Darkness: Whoa, you totally outdid yourself. You actually went and edited the effects to make it more fair and balanced (or accurate). I agree with your changes, so thanks greatly for your detailed effects. Everyone Else: Saying Cards are just Bland and OP without any description isn't helpful at all. Go post on a pros cards if you're not going to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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