ddslong1 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Heres my first 15 cards. Its zombies and chaos stuff XD ITTA is InToTheAbyssGhost rares: Secret Rares: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacobill123 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 uhh. its the same card 5 times.. i like it tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 this is just the same card 5 times. There's some OCG errors, but it's not that bad for a start 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddslong1 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I fixed it i thought the link at the bottom auto changed but you have to click every card XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 all right now it's a bigger improvement over before, but what I said still stands I'll raise the rate to 6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddslong1 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I dont exactly have the OCG down yet. Can you point out anything i did wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metroid Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Too shiny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
watthehell Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 -Always capitalize Summoned, Special Summoned, Set, etc.-If you're talking about drawing a card, say 1 not one.-DARK Attribute monster and LIGHT Attribute-Abyssal Wyvern doesnt make any sense at all. Try "Remove this card from play to Special Summon it the next turn from when you removed it.-Cript Keeper should have a lower ATK or another star.-Chalice of Blood; "Activate when a card effect..."-"Spell(s)" or "Trap(s)"-Dangers of Abyssal Travel Draw not pick up cardsLove the cards, just fix the OCG. Also Try to aim the rays of light in different directions.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Too flashy for my taste but good effort, also read the OCG thread if you need help on your OCG. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Too flashy for my taste but good effort' date=' also read the OCG thread if you need help on your OCG. 7/10[/quote'] This. But don't let us stop you. Keep making more cards and you'll get better in no time. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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