swimmer117 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 More cards, again. Comment and edit please. be specific.Effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Summoning a Spirit". You must Tirbute Monster Cards whose total Levels equal 6 or more from your field or hand. This card may be treated as a Dark-Type. As long as this card remains on your field, LIGHT Monsters cannot be destoryed by DARK Monster Card Effects that target LIGHT Monster Cards.Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may place one "Wolf Spirit Token" on your field (Level 3/Beast-Type/EARTH/ATK: 900/DEF: 800). You cannot use "Wolf Spirit Token" for any Tributes. If "Lady Warrior YowMia-Master of the Wolf Spirit" would be destroyed by a Monster Card Effect, destroy the "Wolf Spirit Token" instead.Effect: You may Tribute Summon this card by Tributing one DARK Monster instead of two Tributes. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every DARK Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field. As long as this card is in play, all LIGHT Monster Cards cannot change their Position. Suggest effects for bland ones. point out OPed cards. Thanks a bunch! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 ok pictures and effects 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Too many Vanillas. Either give them effects or give them support. Also, some OCG errors. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 all the vanillas need spell support, personally I'd prefer you give them effects 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swimmer117 Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Too many Vanillas. Either give them effects or give them support. Also' date=' some OCG errors. 5/10[/quote'] could you point them out so i can fix them.and yes, i have made support cards for the Vanillas, plus i use them in regards to Effect Monster Cards' effects and Tribute requirements.ok pictures and effects 7/10 :) i have like 60 or something like that of these cards, idk. i am making these posts as a preliminary set so i can narrow it down to say, 20-30 cards, 40 tops so you could make a deck out of them.that's what the ultimate goal for me with this is anyways.thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Hero Ant Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Some OCG errors.Blurry images.But for a more or less new member.. its OK.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 [spoiler=OCG Fixes and Balances]Angel of the Full Moon The effect makes reference to a card that doesn't exist; so it will never activate... This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 2 "Angel" monsters you control. While you control "Kila, Angel of the Moon", this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. As long as "Kila, Angel of the Moon" remains face-up on the field, this card can attack your opponent directly and cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Overpowered. A Lv.1 that can strike for 1000 damage each turn and can only be destroyed by card effects. Not even the Spirit monsters can hit that hard. Added a balancing Summoning condition, in bold. Angel Priestess... Shorten the name. And the name of the monster that governs its effect. While you control "Angel-Saint Mari-Anne", this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. As long as "Angel-Saint Mari-Anne" remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select this card as a Trap Card target. Effect is very similar to the first one. Ban-Kai Angelbone Sword Equip only to a non-LIGHT non-Fairy-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. You can negate the effect of Effect Monster Card effects that designate this card. Holly Angel 'Holly' = 'Holy' Summoning a Spirit This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kila of the Moon". You must also offer monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand. Kila of the Moon This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Summoning a Spirit". This card is also treated as a DARK monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, LIGHT monsters cannot be destroyed by DARK Effect Monster Cards effects. YowMia Again, shorten the name. Plus the effect makes no sense in its current form. The tokens cannot be Tributed, yet you have to tribute it to activate this card's effect... When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Wolf Spirit Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 900/DEF 800). This token cannot be Tributed, except by this card's effect. If this card would be destroyed by an Effect Monster Card effect, you can Tribute 1 "Wolf Spirit Token". If you do, this card is not destroyed. Malaya, Queen of the Fallen If a card offers multiple tribute options, then the lower tribute option usually leads to ATK/DEF reduction, a loss of effects, or a limited lifespan. Your card doesn't do that; so it is overpowered. This card can be Normal Summoned or Set with 1 DARK Tribute. In that case, the original ATK and DEF of this card become 1750 and 1950 and this card's effect is negated. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each DARK monster your opponent controls. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters cannot change their battle position. Also, you mention support for the Vanillas, but I see only 1 card. Perhaps you should just give them effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swimmer117 Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 [spoiler=OCG Fixes and Balances]Angel of the Full Moon The effect makes reference to a card that doesn't exist; so it will never activate... This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 2 "Angel" monsters you control. While you control "Kila' date=' Angel of the Moon", this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF. As long as "Kila, Angel of the Moon" remains face-up on the field, this card can attack your opponent directly and cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) [i']Overpowered. A Lv.1 that can strike for 1000 damage each turn and can only be destroyed by card effects. Not even the Spirit monsters can hit that hard. Added a balancing Summoning condition, in bold.[/i] Angel Priestess... Shorten the name. And the name of the monster that governs its effect. While you control "Angel-Saint Mari-Anne", this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. As long as "Angel-Saint Mari-Anne" remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select this card as a Trap Card target. Effect is very similar to the first one. Ban-Kai Angelbone Sword Equip only to a non-LIGHT non-Fairy-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. You can negate the effect of Effect Monster Card effects that designate this card. Holly Angel 'Holly' = 'Holy' Summoning a Spirit This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kila of the Moon". You must also offer monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand. Kila of the Moon This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Summoning a Spirit". This card is also treated as a DARK monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, LIGHT monsters cannot be destroyed by DARK Effect Monster Cards effects. YowMia Again, shorten the name. Plus the effect makes no sense in its current form. The tokens cannot be Tributed, yet you have to tribute it to activate this card's effect... When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Wolf Spirit Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 3/ATK 900/DEF 800). This token cannot be Tributed, except by this card's effect. If this card would be destroyed by an Effect Monster Card effect, you can Tribute 1 "Wolf Spirit Token". If you do, this card is not destroyed. Malaya, Queen of the Fallen If a card offers multiple tribute options, then the lower tribute option usually leads to ATK/DEF reduction, a loss of effects, or a limited lifespan. Your card doesn't do that; so it is overpowered. This card can be Normal Summoned or Set with 1 DARK Tribute. In that case, the original ATK and DEF of this card become 1750 and 1950 and this card's effect is negated. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each DARK monster your opponent controls. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters cannot change their battle position. Also, you mention support for the Vanillas, but I see only 1 card. Perhaps you should just give them effects. would it be a lot easier if i just posted all of my Angel Cards in one thread then let you guys pick away at them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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