gallio Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Please do commentSo here it is and not too much ps all the card names (excluding the candy man) are latin or serbian latin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bran7_3 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I really really like it 9/10 but i think if you can take it out the frame it would be a 10/10 great for 1st card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks, i'll see what i can do with the frame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psycho_juggalo354 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Amazing first! Like that guy said the only problem I see is the frame.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalin963 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG: When this card is removed from the field, all Monster Cards are removed from play. if the card is destroyed by battle, the owner of the card's lifepoints is halved. The card is very underpowered for a Level 7. It's second effect can give the opponent a big advantage, especially since it only has 2000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 PIc is bad. effect is ok OCG si ok. Minor errors Ok for a Newbie ~7/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judai900 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Shouldn't this card be 6 stars? Though the drawback sure is a boom! Nevertheless, a good card for remove from play deck I guess. 8/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 bits of grammer is wrong but ok picture 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG could be better, pic could do without the frame, and effect is ... ouch...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 So what should i change for the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 no, the effect is good, I'm just saying if it gets destroyed, it become s painful for the controller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Ok, changed him slightly and will add more cards in a few minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Nice card for a new memberi don't see that good cards from new members s im giving it a 10/10:] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks, have a few cards left to submit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fategazer Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Zmija is a bit powerful if used in the right way. However the candyman.... creative, and deadly!Both pics are pretty awesome. 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Can anyine say Soul absorbtion???? I like these Cards OCG has been pointed out, NIce sea-serpent support(as rare as that type is) Candyman is creative interesting, but, i dunno about the whole 4000 defense thing. The point iss you want to get it removed right? 4000 defense is hard to beat by a monsters attack. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 candy man's effect is too much of a harm to you, lighten the effect. There's some OCG errors, but this is expected since you're new 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Definately signs of OCG error, and like ragnarok1945 said, this card can do more harm than good for yourself. However you're new and problems like this always happen. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Your OCG needs work. The pics need work as well. Try clicking the OCG Thread in my Sig, it will help you alot. Use Photobucket or DeviantArt for your pics. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks for the reviews im changing the effects/attack a bitadded another card and tell me what u thinkthese are just some test cards to see what i am best at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Kombat Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Pretty Good Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 thanks adding a few more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Edit the frame out of the pic. Good for your first try. There are OCG errors here and there and they're a little OP. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 For Riba you mean when it's summoned, all other monsters on the field are returned to their respective owners' hands 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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