kingdom01 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 this is my newest card, i hope u like itplease do the following :- critisize construcively- rate- comment- advise... Lore: This card can be Special Summoned if you control 2 or more Spellcaster Type Monsters. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase, during the second attack, you can discard 1 card from your hand to increase this card's ATK by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, place 1 "Archon Counter" on 1 monster on the field, when that monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon this card to your field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 That's not an Archon. That's a Twilight Archon. http://www.starcraft2.com/features/protoss/twilightarchon.xml Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 well, i just wrote archon and that pic came out so i put it there, any way, that's not my prob, my prob is to get comments and rates hehe :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 That's all you care about... ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 that's what this thread is for, to get comment and rates from other players to see if i'm good or not and to see how i could get better, isn't that enough ?and now if ur gonna rate or comment go ahead, but if ur gonna just spam here then ur not welcomed and i'll neg u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I wouldn't make the 500 atk gain a permanent one or it's too powerful 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 It's good, but may be abit OP'd if it's a lasting power up. all in all, 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 i see, what do u think is better, decrease the 500 atk gain to 300 or make it a turn by turn use only etc ...any thoughts ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 This card is very powerful you should fix it. Also summoning this card is way too easy, you should have some drawbacks. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG FIX: This card can be Special Summoned if you control 2 or more Spellcaster-Type monsters. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. During this monsters second attack, you can discard 1 card from your hand to increase this card's ATK by 500. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, place 1 Archon Counter on 1 monster on the field. When a monster with an Archon Counter is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. OP'ed. I suggest removing the last part. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 thx for the OCG fix, but i still want to keep the same effect with a bit balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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