Lightning Bagon Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Custom BG credit: Leo This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 FIRE, 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster you control. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 1000 Life Points or destroy this card. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Sun Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 10/ATK 1000/DEF 3000). You can Release 1 monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the Released monster x 200. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. You can only control 1 face-up "Twinkle, Star Of The Sun". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG FIX: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 FIRE, 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster you control. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 500 Life Points or destroy this card. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Sun Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 10/ATK 1000/DEF 3000). You can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the Tributed monster x 200. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. You can only control 1 face-up "Twinkle, Star Of The Sun". OCG needs work. Effect is interesting but a bit OP'ed. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Some OCG errors, OP. Oh and Άř¢ħėłäűŝ, "Release" is actually technically correct. It's the new new OCG that's only used in the anime. 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Your OCG needs fixing, however this is a minor problem. Its effect is unique however it is Oped. Fix these problems and you'll have an excellent card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Some OCG errors' date=' OP. Oh and Άř¢ħėłäűŝ, "Release" is actually technically correct. It's the new new OCG that's only used in the anime. 7.2/10[/quote'] I know. But Released is used in the OCG. If it were a Japanese Card, then it is accepted. But if it is on an English card, it is treated as a TCG card and is replaced with Tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 very nice card, I like it, the pic is nice, the effect is interesting9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 you should have said the token can't attack or it'd be too powerful, you'd flood the whole field with them easily 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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