-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 HiThis is my first card posted here, hope you like it! Lore: You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 1 "Exiled Force" you control from play. When this card destroys a monster by battle, euqip the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster euqipped to this card to destroy 1 Monster on the field. Your oppenent can pay 800 to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card to his/her side of the field. If he do, gain 800 Life Points. don`t know where i found the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Hmmm, pretty nice: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 very good for a first card :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 OCG Fix You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 1 "Exiled Force" you control from play. When this card destroys a monster by battle, equip the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. Your oppenent can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card to his/her side of the field. If they do, gain 800 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 A pretty good first card man. Nice job. Rate - 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks for rating guys:D OCG Fix You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 1 "Exiled Force" you control from play. When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' equip the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. Your oppenent can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card to his/her side of the field. If they do, gain 800 Life Points.[/quote'] Thanks dude, but what have you fixed, i can`t find it^^ Could be plwase point out what can be done better next time? it would be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 whats euqiped? and there is 2 p's in equipped that is the only error i found lol 10/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I´m from Germany my english is not the best^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I will fix the OCG to you You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing from play 1 "Exiled Force" you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, equip the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. Your opponent can pay 800 to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card and you gain 800 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I will fix the OCG to you You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing from play 1 "Exiled Force" you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' eq[b']u[/b]ip the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. Your opponent can pay 800 to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card and you gain 800 Life Points. Thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I dig it. Fantastic stuff for a new member. Exiled Force needs some love nao. 9.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks dude^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 OCG Fix You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 1 "Exiled Force" you control from play. When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' [b']equip[/b] the destroyed monster to this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 monster on the field. Your opponent can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon a monster equipped to this card to their side of the field. If they do, gain 800 Life Points. everything in bold ;)and also, the correct OCG isn't he/she its their Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 good to know, thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Namo already fixed OCG, but good effect based on tributing a real card and pic is good to 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks Tomtekorv, what can i do better that next card will be 10/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 not bad of an effect, made Exiled Force's effect better. The OCG correction is already up, so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 more comments pls!^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 10/10Very epic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 Is there anyone who wants to rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 9/10For a first card is fantastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 good card8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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