NINTENDOPIE Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 i also did a Mallet but it wont show (noob mallet :P) i also did Bowser and a spell card to go along with it and Star Field please say i did it rightTah NINTENDOPIE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 ocg is bad as is the pic3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 grammer and effect is totally wrong and a whote backgrounds dosent make it any better 4/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nath~ Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 ocg errors, effect confusing 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NINTENDOPIE Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 well it sucks it was a prototype lol xD ill get better....eventually >< Grammer was rubbish because it was rushed sorry about all that :l Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 fail of a card, even for a noobeffect should go like --- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing a "Baby Mario" you control.....and then the effect makes no bloody sense after that.human = Warrior3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NINTENDOPIE Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 im only on this site to make cards and to get better at the stuff i suck at (E.G. Description,Pics) so please dont criticize me i only wanted a simple yes or no > Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 fail of a card' date=' even for a noobeffect should go like --- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing a "Baby Mario" you control.....and then the effect makes no bloody sense after that.human = Warrior3/10.[/quote'] This. If you need some help, you can view my Mario Cards below, or you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 OCG and Grammer errors, but I'm sure with a little work you could make it work...Pic has no BG, thus, it is boring. [spoiler=Some Advice] Look at some good cards and learn from them, that is how I became a good card maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 fail of a card' date=' even for a noobeffect should go like --- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing a "Baby Mario" you control.....and then the effect makes no bloody sense after that.human = Warrior3/10.[/quote'] Good, but when you say Release, do you mean Tribute? Otherwise, the current card has terrible OCG and grammar. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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