SolunaFate37 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Well, like it says, this is my first major card. I want to know if you all think it's good or not. And I got the pic off of Google, if you're interested.[attachment=62791]Effect: When this card is Summoned, take 3 non-Monster cards in your Graveyard and place them face-up in 1 unoccupied Monster Card Zone on your field. Whenever a card on your side of the field would be destroyed or removed, you can remove one of those cards from play instead. This card's effect cannot be activated if there are already non-Monster cards in your Monster Card Zone. (Just edited OCG slightly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Now that's a first, 3 spell/traps all placed in a single zone, never heard of something like that before It's a unique effect, but major OCG errors You're new, so I'll still give this 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SolunaFate37 Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Just curious: Where are the OCG errors? I don't see them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 you can start with the first sentence for the OCG errors (then use OCG thread to help you) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 For a first card, that was excellent! Much better than my first card, lol. Name: The name sounds cool, and it fits the description.Picture: Great picture! I know a good source you can use to find more, but I'll mention that later. :)Effect: There are a few minor OCG errors. However, if you want to fix them, the easy way is to PM somebody the effect. One person who does this is a guy named Twin Seed. The harder, but more efficient over time, is to read the OCG (official card grammer) thread. I don't take OCG to seriously though, as long as the errors aren't REALLY bad. The errors I see here are very small. But back to the actual effect. I think the idea is very creative! The people here like long, complex, effects, so if you are going to make an archetype, don't have a monster whose effect is just, say, "This card can attack twice per Battle Phase", and leave it at that. I think, that instead of summoning spells and traps, which doesn't make much sense, especially if all of them are in the same card zone, you should change it to this. make it so you can select 3 monster cards in your Graveyard, (more balanced then spells and traps, imo) and make it so you can remove them from play, (fair cost.) It still may be a bit overpowered that way, but I think that is more balanced. But back to pictures. If you go to the showcase section on this site, and look under some of the different image archives, you will be able to get other really cool pictures. Good luck and happy card making! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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