mixx Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I just want too see what you guys think of them. They're my first cards that i've created. I think there a bit overpowerd though. Cursed Angel (fuision) Dark Warrior Angel of Darkness Dark Curse (spell) Please comment and tell me how i doing and what i can improve one.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 OCG is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Is there a topic on the forums where i can read about ogc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 There should be an OCG tutorial somewhere on this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 his oCg isn't that bad , it's actually good for a new member ;)the first pic is a bit blurry rest is fine but i just see a little bit errors in the OCG 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Oh. I didn't realize he was new. Well, I may be able to help you fix is a little bit. For one thing, never say "sacrifice". Instead, say "tribute". That alone will make the OCG much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 ok thank you. After making some more cards i might take my chances at making a deck of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 As bad as I am at OCG here as some tips as stated already sacrifice=tributegrave yard=graveyarddark type monsters= DARK monsters (attributes are CAP'd and never followed by type)The first letter of types are CAP'd warrior=WarriorA better way to word angel's effect-During the Battle Phase between this card and a LIGHT monster, traps, spells, or monster effects cannot be activated. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 OCG is horrible but not the worst I've seen for new members. Cards are OP. Also, don't use fake types unless they actually work. For a new member... 7/10. Normal rating would be: [spoiler=If you can't take it don't look]4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 most of the card effects are OPed, but that's ok since you're new, and the same goes with the OCG errors (which isn't many anyway) 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 What does oped mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Overpowered, so you should tune down their effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 ohhh ok. i made some elemental birds and i tuned down there atk def and effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Cursed Angel has no type. Angel of Darkness...Jesus Christ ALMIGHTY...has a fake type. Don't make up types. Oh yeah, and they're overpowered. You were right to think that they might be op'd, but wrong not to tune them down before posting. Thankfully, you didn't make the fusion have 8900 ATK or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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