Anubis05 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Hi every one this are my first cards a funny type of monsters which include "Adorable" in their name.All of them are prototypes for now and any suggest will be apreciated.Every "Adorable" monster share this effect:"This card cannot be selected as an attack target."That means that if the only monsters on your side of the field are face up "Adorable" monsters your opponent can attack you directly.For now i have only completed 2 cards, the others heve no effect yet besides the one mentioned above.Hope you like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Theres quite abit of spelling mistakes in your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Fix the errors in the effects. You need to have a drawback, examples like "If there is another "Adorable" monster on the field except for Adorable ****, then this card cannot be selected as an attack target." or better yet "During each of your Standby Phase, you can pay 500 life points, this turn, this card cannot be selected as an attack target." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Thanks you very much . maybe this would work better:"During your End Phase, you can pay 500 life points, during your opponent's next turn, this card cannot be selected as an attack target." I will change the picture as soon as imageshark starts working for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 No problem, happy to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 a little too simple of effects for 1st and 3rd cards, you should give them each another effect 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Well really simple cards 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 there good but you could use a better effect for the first monster :) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Thanks for the comments,but i you read my pos , i said that they are not finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 These are related to Toon Monsters.10/10No Fake Types here, though... Winged-Beast has to be without a dash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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