shadowray2197 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 the key card to the cards: the monster:[spoiler=effect]This Card cannot be Normal summon OR Set.This card can only be Special summon if there is a "Gateway to Hades" and 10 or more DARK monster in your Graveyard.Once per turn you can send 1 DARK Monster from your deck to the graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field.When this card is destroyed you can return 1 Spell card and 1 monster from your graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=effect]This Card cannot be Normal summon OR Set.This card can only be Special summon if there is a "Gateway to Hades" and 2 "King of Darkness-Elphion" in your Graveyard.Once per turn you can Tribute 1 monster you control and gain ATK equal to half the ATK of that monster.When this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent's life points,Destroy 1 card on the field.When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard,Both you and your Opponent Special-Summon 1 level 4 OR lower DARK monster from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Minor OCG error.Minor OP. Hmm... try cutting down the effects or either put more costs. e.g. Gateway to Hades in the Graveyard AND a number of Dark monsters either on the field/Graveyard. Not bad. 7.5/10 for now. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 what is minor? what is op?what is minor? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 9/10Could use a lil' background... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 minor op means that the card is a little bit too strong, that the card is OverPowered (op).Pics are not so good, you could cut away the borders around your images.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 DARK Fiends shall rule the world!I love 'em so you first get +3/10 xD The rest is not so perfect..OCG has errors like "Card" Special summon instead of Special Summoned....What is necesarry to Special Summon Elphion except of controling a Supporting Spell Card?...TOO easy to summon for it's power.. all in all 7/10 (thx to your DARK Fiends (+) ) ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Look closely on the effect. At the moment it means that the cards can only be Special Summoned by OTHER effects, if Gateway to Hades is in you Gaveyard. The card`s cannot be Special Summon themself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 havent read the "only"..^^sry + 0.1..7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 nice card. some minor OCG errors. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Good cards. Minor ocg errors 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 the effects are on the OPed end, and there's some OCG errors, so this gets 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 What's with this obsession with DARK, hell-based monsters and op'd effects? I've seen posts with cards like this more times than I can count. Op'd. Tune it down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 okay i change it's effect a little with more cost of summoning how do you think?????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 it's a little better, I'll raise the rate to 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 so what should i do to make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSleep Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 7.2/10 ^^ darksleep should also add a reason...or i'll neg rep him to death O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Lots of OCG errors, bordered images, most of the effects are very dull or already done. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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