drachma10 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 The Head set. please tell me ALL errors in the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Major OCG errors, all the pictures are unimpressive Final Head is Oped anyway 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakiru Takagi Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 OCG: "Official Card Grammer"i like where your going with it, but here's whats wrong... The First Head: its too UPed *under powered*, make its atk around 700 and the def the same.OCG fix: "When this card is Summoned successfuly to your side of the field, Inflict damage to your opponent equal to this cards ATK." that's the whole Effect. nothing more The Second Head: UPed, atk about 1600, def can stay the same.OCG fix: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned Except by offering 1 "The First Head" on your side of the field as a Tribute. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, place this card and 1 "The First Head" from your Graveyard into your Deck, Shuffle it afterwards." The Third Head: make atk about 2400, def around 2000 (keep in mind that it takes 2 previous tributes to get to the field.)OCG fix: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 1 "The Second Head" on your side of the field as a Tribute. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard." The Fourth Head: atk at about 2800 or so, def at around 2500.OCG fix:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 1 "The Third Head" on your side of the field as a Tribute. Once per turn, you may pay any number of Life Points, Increase either the ATK or DEF of this card equal to the amount of Life Points you paid." The Summoner: give it a more original name such as "The Head Summoner".OCG fix: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "The Fifth Head". Offer 1 "The Fourth Head" on your side of the field as well as 1 Level 5 or higher monster on your side of the field field as a Tribute." The Final Head: Atk and Def are pretty balanced.OCG fix: "This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "[name of the ritual card]". As long as this card remains Face-up on your side of the field, Multiply the Original ATK and DEF of all other "Head" monsters on your side of the field by 2." Make sure you retype the OCG of each card EXACTLY how i have written it here. im hoping to open an OCG tutorial soon so if you have any other questions please PM me.@ ragnarok: it takes the chain tributing of 4 other monsters, i think that its good where its at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 boring. Ritual is too powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drachma10 Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Thanks for your help Dragonblix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 You could use some new images:(...6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 ehh... not so good, sorry, but pics are bad and you have OCG errors as well but will give you 5/10for being new here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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