qwertykool Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Please make your tips as im new to YCM :shock:UPDATE; ATK LOWERED. Lore:2 TUNERS + 1 or more non-TUNERSIf this card is offered for a tribute summon, immediately summon the card by tributing this card only. No equip cards can be equipped to this card. Once per turn you can discard any card from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. Lore: This card card cannot be normal summoned, set or special summoned. This card can only be ritual summoned by the effect of "Joining of the Elements" This card is also treated as a Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Dark and Light type monster. Select 1 element. This card's ATK is equal to the number of monsters in either player's graveyard that contain the same element x 300. Lore:You can only activate this card if you have 5 different attributes on your monsters zones. Pay 1000 Life Points and tribute all 5 monsters on your side of the field to Ritual Summon "Elemental Commander" From your hand or deck to the field. Lore:This monster is also treated as a Pyro Type. Once per turn you may attack your opponent directly for 1500 LP. You cannot use this effect if your opponent has less than 2000 LP. If you use this effect you cannot attack with "Pyra" this turn. Lore: Equip only to a Warrior or a Spellcaster. For every Dragon Type monster in the graveyard, the equipped monster gains 100 ATK and 50 DEF Give me tips plz on how to help my cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 don't make DIVINE attributes, and give the vanillas some effects Now, onto the effects themselves and OCG errors aside, your synchro should have another effect, then tune down its atk 7/10 since you're new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakiru Takagi Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 hmm.. 7/10 for effort, but please dont let that discourage you, the more you try the better you get. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 You misspelled shield and defense. Okay I guess, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Your cards a descent, don't let this discourage you, your efforts are very good. Make sure to fix your OCG mistakes. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 They're pretty good for a starter, the first card is somewhat overpowered but the rest are pretty good. Some of the pictures that have a white background could use a background to make it look better. A few OCG errors and you're pretty much good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qwertykool Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 thanks everyone for the tips! one quick ?What are the OCG's i broke >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 To a new menber really good.8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Some OCG errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qwertykool Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Im trying to make a LOAD MORE cards for it k? it will be done soon (or soon enough) :L.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bott52 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 OCG faults but they r alright 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 good cards7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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