My first Synchro monster:D

[YGOGX Master]

This is the first Synchro monster i did so please subscribe it so that i know if i can make some more.

Effect: 1 LV2 Tuner + "Dark Magician"

This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for every Spellcaster-type in your Graveyard. Each time you or your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, put 1 Spell Counter on this card. Remove 4 Spell Counters from this card to destroy all monsters on the field except this card.

 

The pic comes from DevianArt:P

[Felix]

You don't need to say it needs to be a level 2 Tuner. The effect is kind of basic and needs some work. Pic is good but you need credit, "from DeviantArt" does not qualify. Also, it's "Spellcaster-Type", you need to capitalize the T.

[Demiurge]

@YGOGX Master: Neat card! seams a tad OPed though. 9/10!

 

@Yugiohkingofhell: Please don't post your cards on other people's threads.

[Chaos Flame]

Don't post your own cards in someone elses thread, yugiohkingofhell, besides its OP'ed and has a lame pic.

Now to the real topic.

You don't have to specify that the tuner needs to be two stars. It has a good effect and suprisingly good OCG for a new member, just remember, when getting spell counters its whenever A spell card is played, not 1 spell card. Very nice 9.5/10

[Hrash0]

You don't need to say it's a Level 2 tuner, it's self explanatory. OCG is a bit shabby. It would be closer to this (but mine isn't perfect.)

 

This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for every Spellcaster-type Monster in your Graveyard. Each time you or your opponent activates a Spell Card, put 1 Spell Counter on this card. You may remove 4 Spell Counters from this card to destroy all monsters on the field except this card.

 

Pretty good OCG, only a few small corrections.

8.5/10

 

Awesome for a first Synchro monster.

[Jazin Kay]

Very good Photoshoppery.

[ragnarok1945]

just put a max 4 for the spell counter limit, then you should be good to go

 

8.8/10

[SuperSusanoo]

cool I thought that was gonna be the new Dark Magician Art for the real cards.

anyways 9/10

[~Oleon~]

Peter Griffin card is rubbish, Supreme Dark magician is wow, it may be a bit OPed, and a few minor OCG errors, but it's brilliant nonetheless.

 

10/10.

[Force_Flex]

[align=center]1 LV2 Tuner + "Dark Magician"

This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each Spellcaster-Type card in your Graveyard. Each time a Spell Card is activated, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 4). At the end of your Battle Phase, you can remove 4 Spell Counters from this card to destroy all monsters on the field (except this card).

 

Anything underlined is what I'm not sure of. Bolded is fixed and italicized is what I think you should add. I haven't made a card in a while so I'm a bit rusty. It's a good card, but pretty OP. In a Spell Counter deck, this card could exceed 3500 easily. Plus it's ability to destroy all other monsters on the field leaves your opponent for a direct attack. For a first, it's okay.

 

7.8/10[/align]

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

That card is pretty cool but look at my first card.

 

9/10 for the first post card

and Yugiohkingofhell's card must be in his own thread

[Cloister]

OCG is fixed, but cool card and could be useful 9/10

[Hakiru Takagi]

lets rate:

 

Originality: 9/10

Pic: 10/10

OCG: 9/10

new member: 10/10

 

Total: 9.5/10

 

i commend you on the creation of your first posted card. you've got potential to be a great card maker... PM me and lets see if we cant put your graphic art skills to good use in my shop... ;)

[Alordzynix]

I don't get why some of you are saying that he should remove the LV2 part. It isn't self explanatory because it doesn't say that it has to be a LV7 Dark Magician Monster. Doing it this way prevents people from using Elemental Hero Prisma's effect instead of summoning a real Dark Magician. I suggest to make it cost more Spell Counters because in a Spell Counter Deck getting 4 is a piece of cake.