Admiral Tim Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 you can remove successfully from the text, it's not needed nice way to boost its attack, though it should still have another effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Nice idea, but the opponent will smash that card before it has a chance to get REALLY powerful.7.10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Nice idea' date=' but the opponent will smash that card before it has a chance to get REALLY powerful.7.10.[/quote'] um i am making support so like pumpkin splatter, negates the attack and also i paid for an ocg fix from princess mia, should i redo it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Any interesting start to a set and very festive!! Thats a cool idea for an effect I like it alot and the pic too, but maybe an addition to the effect like this card can only be destroyed by LIGHT monsters maybe just make it alittle harder to destroy if it ends up on the field on its own...8.5/10 good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 k added more to effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
::тǿρħєя:: Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Nice, I like the pic, and I think this may belong in Any Other Cards. Now for your OCG, I believe this is the correct one: When a "Jack" Monster you control inflicts damage to your opponent, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the damage inflicted. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you may pay 1000 life points to Special Summon this card to your side of the field. Also, 1 more thing: I recommend putting a space before and after the name's hyphen: "Jack - Monarch of Halloween." I'll give you a 8/10. I'd like to see more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Nice simple add on to Jack the Monarch with the life points part. Son of Jack is a cool card I like that alot too, nice and balanced. A normal card too woop woop! like the name and the text maybe a little short but cool none the less but the pic looks a bit computer game to me hmmmm...going up 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 nice effect and pictures 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
::тǿρħєя:: Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Bumped up to a 9.5/10. If you'd like, I can take that red frame out of the Seedling card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 I'm not viewing OCG, they make 1% ofall cards...10/10They COULD be Spellcaster-Type though...They look like. Here's a suggestion: Maybe you could make Trick and Treat's Fusion!And make a Synchro here... Never seen your Synchroes before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 I'm not viewing OCG' date=' they make 1% ofall cards...10/10They COULD be Spellcaster-Type though...They look like. Here's a suggestion: Maybe you could make Trick and Treat's Fusion!And make a Synchro here... Never seen your Synchroes before.[/quote'] that is what is was planning the trick or treat fusion, i don't like synchros i don't make them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 good cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 added fusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 OCG errors, such as sacrifice (change to tribute) and may (change to can) 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Your OCG errors are the common ones.9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Like the cards 8/10Dont like the pics so much though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Like the cards 8/10Dont like the pics so much though Why pics bad? Wow, you're the only guy creating such deck!I don't really like decks which mainly focus on 1 type or 1 Attribute, they are easily destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 So, what's next?9/10 still... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Most of the pic's are ok.The OCG seems fine, 1 question though, how much is the ATK decrease in "trick or treat"?A 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiNjA-BlAdE Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Nice 8/10. im making halloween cards 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Nice 8/10. im making halloween cards 2 Good for you, I'll await them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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