B F - Grand Storm Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 this card is special for the warrior deck it's so cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COLS Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 Ok. this is the ultimate over anticipation. Crawling with OCG and spelling mistakes. It makes my skin itch when i see that many."Pay half you Life Points to activate this card. Remove from play 1 Warrior-type monster from your hand, Deck, or graveyard. Special Summon 1 Warrior-type monster to the field." Also, you could try making the effect more beneficial for the player.6.5\10Yeah, i used a backslash. Deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 Wow, card grammar and just plain grammar are bad. Where is the monster special summoned from? It's a bit UP'd, unless ur LP are kinda low anyway and u remove 1 weak warrior type monster from play, or 1 that would benefit from being out of play, then summon something awesome, like buster blader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 half your LP is too much, and the OCG looks terrible :( 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 At least you said Type with caps.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Fix the OCG and also the effect is a bit unclear about how it works also. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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