Guest H3SE Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Here are the centerpieces of my new set. Please rate and leave suggestions.EDIT: Added Cards[spoiler=Cards] [spoiler=Effects][spoiler=Tumult the Destroyer]This card can only be Summoned from your hand by Releasing 1 "Jaw of Pandemonium" that is equipped to "Angry Dragon Lord". Any monster your opponent Synchro Summons is destroyed during the End Phase, this effect cannot be negated. If this card is destroyed or removed from play, you can pay 4000 Life Points to Summon this card in 3 turns.[spoiler=Angry Dragon Lord]Whoever controls this card cannot Special Summon during their Main Phases. During each End Phase your opponent takes 500 damage. If you pay 700 Life Points during your Standby Phase, switch control of this card to your opponent until the end of your Battle Phase.[spoiler=Jaw of Pandemonium]The equipped monsters effects are negated, and cannot be targeted by the effects of monsters your opponent controls. If any Trap Cards are face-up you take 1000 damage during your End Phase.[spoiler=Tumult's Advisor]"Tumult's Minion" + "Tumult's Minion" + "Tumult's Minion"All face-up monsters with "Tumult" in their name gain 200 ATK and 300 DEF. If "Tumult the Destroyer" is face-up on the field, this monster gains 1000 ATK and 1000 DEF.[spoiler=Tumult's Minion]All face-up monsters with "Tumult" in it's name gains 300 ATK. If there are 3 "Tumult's Minion" in your hand, you can Summon all 3 during your Main Phase 2.[spoiler=Tumult's Minion 2]This card's name is treated as "Tumult's Minion". Select 1 card you control with "Tumult" in it's name and that monster, gains 500 DEF, can change it's attribute to FIRE until the End Phase, and cannot be targeted by cards you control. If there are 3 "Tumult's Minion" in your hand, you can Summon all 3 during your Main Phase 2.[spoiler=Tumult's Minion 3]This card's name is treated as "Tumult's Minion". During your opponent's Battle Phase, all face-up monsters with "Tumult" in their name gains 800 DEF. If there are 3 "Tumult's Minion" in your hand, you can Summon all 3 during your Main Phase 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grandreaper Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 3/5 its fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Well all I notice are OCG errors but they're great cards overall with pretty balanced effects and great pictures. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 all 3 effects looks relatively balanced out, I'll give this 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Well all I notice are OCG errors but they're great cards overall with pretty balanced effects and great pictures. 8.5/10 What is(are) the observed OCG error(s)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 OCG errors, such as "Whoever controls this monster" should be "This card's controller" and "By releasing 1 "Jaw of Pandemonium" that is equipped to "Angry dragon Lord"" should be "You can tribute 1 "Angry Dragon Lord" equipped with "Jaw of Pandemonium" to Special Summon this card from your hand. The effects are balanced and pretty interesting, and the pics look good, but pic 2 is a bit strange. No OCG errors I can see beyond those 2.Rating: 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 OCG errors' date=' such as "Whoever controls this monster" should be "This card's controller" and "By releasing 1 "Jaw of Pandemonium" that is equipped to "Angry dragon Lord"" should be "You can tribute 1 "Angry Dragon Lord" equipped with "Jaw of Pandemonium" to Special Summon this card from your hand. The effects are balanced and pretty interesting, and the pics look good, but pic 2 is a bit strange. No OCG errors I can see beyond those 2.Rating: 7.8/10[/quote'] "Whoever controls this monster" is okay because it is old OCG, outdated but not unacceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 I have added 4 more monsters to the set. Please rate them. I am thinking of making this a 25 Card set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 just Minion 3's effect is a little bland, so the new cards get 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest H3SE Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Really cool pics.8.7/10And cool pics again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 OCG errors' date=' such as "Whoever controls this monster" should be "This card's controller" and "By releasing 1 "Jaw of Pandemonium" that is equipped to "Angry dragon Lord"" should be "You can tribute 1 "Angry Dragon Lord" equipped with "Jaw of Pandemonium" to Special Summon this card from your hand. The effects are balanced and pretty interesting, and the pics look good, but pic 2 is a bit strange. No OCG errors I can see beyond those 2.Rating: 7.8/10[/quote'] "Whoever controls this monster" is okay because it is old OCG, outdated but not unacceptable.I agreethere are a bad amount of ocg errors7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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