Aa'une Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I decided to make a Spellcasters, Fairys, and Warriors set and I decided to make it a VS. PokeMaster Calvin might help me out with this set.[spoiler=Spellcasters and Fairys][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn you can negate an attack targeting a Fairy Type Monster on your side of the field. When a Fairy Type Monster on your side of the field would be destroyed by battle, you can destroy a Spell or Trap Card on your side of the field instead. This card gains 200 DEF for every Fairy Type Monster on your side of the field.[spoiler=Warriors] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Your fairy set is good not much flaws at all mostly just some OCG errors here and there. The field cards are a bit too vague and too much like the Pharaoh's Servant field cards and before that have only ATK and DEF increase but nothing else, which made them useless. Also, Roka should require 2 tributes/7 stars to summon since it has a cheap effect that allows you to target your own spell and trap cards and destroy them instead of a fairy type monster. Now, your warrior set. These aren't the greatest, but they're ok overall. For your Pisca the Warrior of the Forest, you should crop the border that's in the original picture out first before you put it in the card generator otherwise it has 2 borders. Also, Pisca's effect is very blank and is not very useful since rarely any decks run a field card; you should give it an alternate effect that would fit it better. Your card Gladiator is like a Spear Dragon except without the drawback, which in a way makes it cheap since it's a 1900 ATK hitter and why give 2250 DEF because that makes it like a defender too thus making it more of a monster that should require 1 tribute/5 or 6 stars to summon then. I'd suggest just going for 1700 DEF or lower otherwise it would double as a defender like Gear Golem the Moving Fortress. The Sword I see that it's just your typical equip card that doesn't increase a lot or decrease alot. It's very basic. Make its effect more unique. Your card The Army Advances needs a drawback or cost to it to make it more balanced like "Pay 3000 Life Points in order to activate this card." or "You must tribute 1 monster during each of your Standby Phases. If you cannot, this card is destroyed." Overall, some of them need work and others are fine. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aa'une Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Your fairy set is good not much flaws at all mostly just some OCG errors here and there. The field cards are a bit too vague and too much like the Pharaoh's Servant field cards and before that have only ATK and DEF increase but nothing else' date=' which made them useless. Also, Roka should require 2 tributes/7 stars to summon since it has a cheap effect that allows you to target your own spell and trap cards and destroy them instead of a fairy type monster. Now, your warrior set. These aren't the greatest, but they're ok overall. For your Pisca the Warrior of the Forest, you should crop the border that's in the original picture out first before you put it in the card generator otherwise it has 2 borders. Also, Pisca's effect is very blank and is not very useful since rarely any decks run a field card; you should give it an alternate effect that would fit it better. Your card Gladiator is like a Spear Dragon except without the drawback, which in a way makes it cheap since it's a 1900 ATK hitter and why give 2250 DEF because that makes it like a defender too thus making it more of a monster that should require 1 tribute/5 or 6 stars to summon then. I'd suggest just going for 1700 DEF or lower otherwise it would double as a defender like Gear Golem the Moving Fortress. The Sword I see that it's just your typical equip card that doesn't increase a lot or decrease alot. It's very basic. Make its effect more unique. Your card The Army Advances needs a drawback or cost to it to make it more balanced like "Pay 3000 Life Points in order to activate this card." or "You must tribute 1 monster during each of your Standby Phases. If you cannot, this card is destroyed." Overall, some of them need work and others are fine. 7/10[/quote']OK thanks I changed almost all of them. and the pay 800 on The Army Advances means each time you activate the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Pisca's effect is a little too plain, the OCG looks pretty good, as are the rest of the effects 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Choji911 Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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