1st Generation Phoenix and (one of my best + updated) the Spirit Dragon

[Neo-MasterX]

That Spirit Dragon is my speciality

 

First Generation Phoenix(Please remember its the first)

Lore:

After this monster attacks your opponents Life Points directly sent this monster and 2 Trap/Spell card to the graveyard and pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Spirit Dragon" from your Deck to your side of the field.

 

 

Spirit Dragon(I think this is like an Earthbound Immortal)

Lore:

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of First Generation Phoenix. If there are no opponent's monster in Attack Position, this monster can attack your opponents Life Points directly. If it attacks your opponent's Life Points successfully this monster changes its position to Defense Position.

 

CORRECTED

[Big Lez]

You worded the 1st effect kind of weird..pretty much conditions..but it's nice i guess.

 

Some Help for Spirit Dragon

Defend Position = Defense Position

succesful = succesfully

opponent monster = opponent monsters ( i think !?)

opponents = opponent's

 

Overall 8/10

(by now...rating will be raised as soon as you corrected the minor OCG errors)

[Neo-MasterX]

You worded the 1st effect kind of weird..pretty much conditions..but it's nice i guess.

 

Some Help for Spirit Dragon

Defend Position = Defense Position

succesful = succesfully

opponent monster = opponent monsters ( i think !?)

opponents = opponent's

 

Overall 8/10

(by now...rating will be raised as soon as you corrected the minor OCG errors)

 

corrected and thnx for the fixes

[Big Lez]

hmm it still should be :"First Generation Phoenix"..dont cancel the " "

And there is empty space, what should be below the effect-text ;)

[Neo-MasterX]

hmm it still should be :"First Generation Phoenix"..dont cancel the " "

And there is empty space' date=' what should be below the effect-text ;)

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ok i ll correct that too

[Max Darkness]

OCG Fixes

 

If this card attacks your opponent directly, you can Tribute this card, discard 2 Spell or Trap Cards in your hand and pay 1200 Life Points. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Spirit Dragon" from your Deck to your side of the field.

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "First Generation Phoenix". If your opponent controls no Attack Position monsters, this card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks directly, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase.This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of the next turn.

 

 

6/10

[Big Lez]

max you forgot sth.

The monster is destroyed, too

so, you can Tribute this monster +....

[Max Darkness]

max you forgot sth.

The monster is destroyed' date=' too

so, you can Tribute this monster +....

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I'm confused. I don't understand what you're saying.

[Jolta]

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

spirit dragon you forgot to say it can't be normal summoned (which would make it OPed if it could)

 

7/10

[Big Lez]

max you forgot sth.

The monster is destroyed' date=' too

so, you can Tribute this monster +....

[/quote']

 

I'm confused. I don't understand what you're saying.

 

The OCG correction you wrote...

There is missing, that you need to Tribute the monster

[Max Darkness]

max you forgot sth.

The monster is destroyed' date=' too

so, you can Tribute this monster +....

[/quote']

 

I'm confused. I don't understand what you're saying.

 

The OCG correction you wrote...

There is missing, that you need to Tribute the monster

 

Oh yeah. Fixed.