My cards possibly suck - rate them and tell me what you think.

[DudeMan95]

WARNING! NOOB THREAD!!

 

Ok, this is my first post on this site. (Please don't flame me.) I've made a couple of cards and I'd like to know weather they're cool, ok or suck. Every card is numbered. What I want you to do is type the card number and type your rating next to it. The ratings are: Awesome/Cool/Ok/Suck/Horrible. Here are the cards:

 

 

1*Asteroid Attack

When equiped to either a Pyro type or Fire attribute monster, this card doubles overall attack for a single turn. The card is then detroyed.

(Super Rare)

 

2*Caduceus

Add 500 to your total life points.

(Common)

 

3*Demon's Bane

All Dark attribute monsters loose 500 attack and defence points, while all Earth attribute monsters gain the same - as long as this card remains on the field.

(Super Rare)

 

4*Devine Intervention

When a monster on your side of the field is attacked, the target monster momentarily gaines infinite attack and defence points, causing the attacking monster to be destroyed. The life points lost are equal to the destroyed monster's attack points, however. This card is then shuffled back into your deck.

(Super Rare)

 

5*Gauntlet Garutch

A fighter of the old world, Garutch has returned, seeking the thrill of battle. They say his blood-lust remaines unmatched by mortal souls.

(Super Rare)

 

6*Drakthorn, Slayer of Death

"Gauntlet Garutch" + "Lava Battleguard"

All Zombie and/or Spirit type monsters are sent to the graveyard on both sides of the field - including those in the decks.

(Ultra Rare)

 

7*Flame of Tartarus

You must attack and destroy 3 oposing level 5+ monsters on the enemy side of the field aswell as sacrifice 1 level 6+ monster on your side of the field after playing "Call of Tartarus" to summon this monster.

(Ultimate Rare)

 

8*Call of Tartarus

After playing this card, attack and destroy 3 oposing level 5+ monsters on the enemy side of the field aswell as sacrifice 1 level 6+ monster on your side of the field to summon "Flame of Tartarus".

(Ultimate Rare)

 

9*Gold Eyes Green Dragon

Though not as aggresive as it's white and black relatives, this fearsome dragon can destroy entire towns when angred.

(Rare)

 

10*Gold Eyes Ulimate Dragon

"Gold Eyes Green Dragon" + "Gold Eyes Green Dragon" + "Gold Eyes Green Dragon"

(Ultra Rare)

 

11*Spell Board

Whenever your oponent uses a spell card, you may activate this trap card. The activated spell card is immediately sent to your hand, while all remaining spell cards on your oponents side of the field (including face-down cards) are destroyed.

(Ultra Rare)

 

12*Twilight Temple

All Dark attribute monsters gain 200 attack but loose 200 defence when this card is activated, while the reverse is true for Light atribute monsters. When this card is destoyed all Dark and/or Light atribute monsters on the field are destroyed.

(Ultra Rare)

 

13*Unleashed Pegasus of Light

Destroy 5 Dark attribute monsters from your hand, deck or your side of the field after activating "Uleashing the Pegasus of Light" to summon this card.

(Secret Rare)

 

14*Unleashing the Pegasus of Light

When this card is played, sacrifice 5 Dark attribute monsters from your hand, deck, or your side of the field. This allowes you to summon the "Unleashed Pegasus of Light".

(Secret Rare)

 

15*Wizard's Lake

All sorcerer/spellcaster type monsters gain 1000 attack and defence. Every turn, the opponent must pay the caster one sorcerer/spellcaster type monster card or continuous spell card from his/her deck. The deck is shuffled. If a card can not be payed, the opponent payes 250 lifepoints instead. When this card is destroyed, all placed spell cards are destroyed with it.

(Secret Rare)

 

 

Please rate them all the way I told you and tell me what you think. Thanks! ;)

[•:Elonar:•]

Wrong Section, Cards go in the Realistic Cards Section.

[Amaterasu]

Wrong section. put in Custom cardz.

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These aren't too bad for a newbie. I'd say 7/10 because you don't know OCG yet.

 

And these cards are a bit underpowered.

[賢狼ホロ]

I will be quite blunt, but do not be discouraged.

I'll try to correct the OCG (Official Card Grammar) as well, but you might want to hear with some more seasoned members as well.

 

1. OK! I think this card is overpowered, but I am not sure. (Compare "Limiter Removal".)

 

"This card can only be equipped to a Pyro-Type or FIRE Attribute monster on your side of the field. Double the ATK for that card. During your End Phase, destroy this card."

 

 

2. Suck! Does this card increase your life points by 500 and nothing more? I think it is quite useless. The effect is not interesting.

"Increase your Life Points by 500."

 

3. OK! This too I think is overpowered. It should probably have a cost.

"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the ATK and DEF for all face-up DARK Attribute monster on the field by 500 and increase the ATK and DEF for all face-up EARTH Attribute monster on the field by 500."

 

4. Horrible! This is terribly overpowered. Infinite ATK or DEF would mean that the attacking player would lose infinite Life Points. This is really Sakuretsu Armor but it returns to your hand as well being a quick-play card. Terribly overpowered.

 

10. Suck! Overpowered. The interesting about this card is that you pick up the opponents spell card to your own hand. The bad things is that it is a quick-play trap card (is there such thing?) and it destroys all of your opponents spell cards as well.

 

11. OK! "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK by 200 and decrease the DEF by 200 for all face-up DARK Attribute monsters. Decrease the ATK by 200 and increase the DEF by 200 for all face-up LIGHT Attribute monsters. When this card is destroyed, destroy all face-up DARK and LIGHT Attribute monsters.

 

14. Horrible! Terribly overpowered.

 

Start with this, and we will see where we get.

[ZeroOfCards]

You peoples are just bad sports. Cards are cards and i think he diserves what he diserves.

These cards are fine and i give them a 8 / 10!

maybe he just forgot to put it the right catagory, but theyre fine.

Hmph!

[DudeMan95]

Ok, I'll be sure to de-power the overpowered ones (they realy are terribly overpowered!!!!! But I made them extremely rare), as for Caduceus, I made that extremely common, but I'll increase the nomber of life points that are increased. I don't think "Demon's Bane" is overpowered, though. I agree with most of those ratings. Thanks. ;)

 

How does one move a thread to a diffirent section?

[ImmortalD]

Ask and Ye shall receive. (Reported for Moderator Viewing. they'll move it.)

[Mindscatter]

I've seen worse first cards. 6/10 and live with it.

[DudeMan95]

Thanks for your ratings. I've added the card rarity below the decription to make the overpowered ones seem less overpowered. ;)

[Stoopid1]

Being new to this particular site really doesn't matter, since the fact that you are here means that you know how to play Yugioh. If you are a noob at Yugioh itself, you should specify that instead. If you're experienced at Yugioh, you should know better about how to write grammatically correct card effects. Sorry, it's just that I'm not afraid to say what I think. I like the pictures you chose tho.

[Dranzer]

Bad,but for a noob 5/10

[Casmy]

6.5/10

[DudeMan95]

Being new to this particular site really doesn't matter' date=' since the fact that you are here means that you know how to play Yugioh. If you are a noob at Yugioh itself, you should specify that instead. If you're experienced at Yugioh, you should know better about how to write grammatically correct card effects. Sorry, it's just that I'm not afraid to say what I think. I like the pictures you chose tho.

[/quote'] Yes, I can play the game, though I'm definately no pro. I have my own custom-made deuling-board, however, yet I kinda suck at playing (the sacrifise-summon part is hard for me since my opponent nearly always destroys my cards before I can sacrifice them). The reason my grammar and/or spelling is so bad is because I'm South African... (no offence, fellow South Africans). By the way, you spelt "though" wrong. :? But you're welcome to say what you like.

 

I'm glad you like the pics!!! :mrgreen:

[Hotsasuma]

7/10 pretty good for your first few cards.

[Stoopid1]

By the way' date=' you spelt "though" wrong. :? But you're welcome to say what you like.

 

I'm glad you like the pics!!! :mrgreen:

[/quote']

 

A lot of people spell words wrong on purpose, because it's the internet. I like saying "tho."

[ragnarok1945]

for someone new, these are still reasonable, so just keep it up and you'll get better

 

6/10

[Hero Neos Wiseman]

WAY too OP.because,I mean,5000 ATK and LvL10?!Counter Spell card and Quick-Play trap card?!and finally,demon Lord-type?I maybe a Newbie here but at least i don't create such things.i give you a 7/10 for the nice try.I sugest you take the ATK of Tartarus to 3500 and change it to fiend-Type and change your"Counter-Spell" to Quick-Play Spell.And the "Quick-play trap" to counter trap.Also,say the name of the Ritual Spell of tartarus and take the ATK of pegasus to 4500,winch is cool for a LvL 12 monster.Oh!yeah,the OCG(mine may not be perfect but isn't that bad,or is?).

[DudeMan95]

ALL ritual monsters need ritual spell cards??? 0.o Oh... I thought you just needed to do something specific to summon the monster. As for counter and quickplay, I get confused with them pretty easily...

[lucasnick]

9/14 [rsrsrs]

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dudeman95 get the basics in the forum

[lordpraiser69]

Pretty good in the sense that i too am a newb and have room to talk. Ocg needs some work and some cards are pretty OP'd or UP'd but like i said im a newb so from my point of view 7/10

[Jolta]

Fine to me

8/10

[Dark Mousy]

Could be worse. Way worse... Seriously.