jalern Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Let me see:- Capitalize the names and Types.- Level should be Level 1, considering the stats and effect- Effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar). let me fix it:"When this card is Summoned, destroy all Dragon and Reptile-Type monsters on the field."-Image is slightly dim But aside from that, it's good! 5.5/10. Just understand what people comment on, make changes of your own, and your cards will become pretty good. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 ^^ditto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 ^^ditto-ing ^^ditto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Let me see:- Capitalize the names and Types.- Level should be Level 1' date=' considering the stats and effect- Effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar). let me fix it:"When this card is Summoned, destroy all Dragon and Reptile-Type monsters on the field."-Image is slightly dim But aside from that, it's good! 5.5/10. Just understand what people comment on, make changes of your own, and your cards will become pretty good. Keep it up![/quote']Agree............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Let me see:- Capitalize the names and Types.- Level should be Level 1' date=' considering the stats and effect- Effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar). let me fix it:"When this card is Summoned, destroy all Dragon and Reptile-Type monsters on the field."-Image is slightly dim But aside from that, it's good! 5.5/10. Just understand what people comment on, make changes of your own, and your cards will become pretty good. Keep it up![/quote'] Agrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Nice. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 3/10 and I agree with Srarly_64 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr.octagonapus6969 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Not even worth to vote for. Terrible OCG, bad pic. CHANGE IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 (\__/)(='.'=) This is Bunny. Copy and paste bunny into your(")_(") signature to help him gain world domination.Hey! Thats a funny rabbit!What's with the spam? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 please do not spam.everything starly said, goes for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenMetal Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Let me see:- Capitalize the names and Types.- Level should be Level 1' date=' considering the stats and effect- Effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar). let me fix it:"When this card is Summoned, destroy all Dragon and Reptile-Type monsters on the field."-Image is slightly dim But aside from that, it's good! 5.5/10. Just understand what people comment on, make changes of your own, and your cards will become pretty good. Keep it up![/quote']i also agree but most of all the ocg could use some help. so just change it to wat starly said and change pic plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I would recommend a trip down the Tutorial section, the FAQ thread and reading other threads with examples of better OCG before making any other cards - provided jalern does want to improve himself and make better cards in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.T.B. Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 blurry pic. ocg mistakes. to underpowered or over stared. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 ditto^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Let me see:- Capitalize the names and Types.- Level should be Level 1' date=' considering the stats and effect- Effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar). let me fix it:"When this card is Summoned, destroy all Dragon and Reptile-Type monsters on the field."-Image is slightly dim But aside from that, it's good! 5.5/10. Just understand what people comment on, make changes of your own, and your cards will become pretty good. Keep it up![/quote'] agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Why was this necrobumped? plz stop posting in it and request it be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.