optical-mess Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 My first card in a very long time please rate and tell me if I should do more. Lore:Once per turn you can equip 1 monster on your opponents side of the field to this card. This card gains that monsters Attack Defence and Effect. When this card is destroyed destroy the monster that was equipped to this card instead all battle damage taken comes out of your life points. Lore:While there is a face up "Kirby - Hero Of Dreamland" on the field give this card this effect-When "Kirby - Hero Of Dreamland" has a monster equipped to it and this card is selected as a attack target redirect the attack target to "Kirby - Hero Of Dreamland" Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set this card can only be special summoned by the effect of "King Dedede" When this face up card on the field is selected as a attack target and you have a face up "Kirby - Hero Of Dreamland" Or "King Dedede" on your side of the field negate your opponents attack and end there battle phase Lore:When this card is normal summoned succesfully special summon up to 4 "Waddle Dee" "Waddle Doo" or "Gordo" cards from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Just a hint. If the text is hard to read; you might want to consider adding a [b]Lore:[/b] in there; then copy/pasting the text from the text box after the word Lore. Just a friendly suggestion, because although I can read it, other people may not be able to. 9/10 otherwise though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
optical-mess Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Thanks I didn't know thatI can't do it help :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windslayer Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Nice card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Thanks I didn't know thatI can't do it help :( The end code needs to have the forward slash "/" before the "b" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 OCG errors.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I like the idea you are trying for.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
optical-mess Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
optical-mess Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Waddle Dee and King dedede added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 OCG errors in the newer cards.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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