ZeroLuneth Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 1 tuner monster + 2 non-tuner DARK monstersThis card can not be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard, its effect is negated and it can not declare an attack this turn. While this card is face-up on the field it is also treated as a FIRE attribute monster.Once per turn you can remove from play 4 monsters in your Graveyard to activate one of the following effects.-Draw 2 cards from your deck then discard 1 card from your hand.-Your Opponent randomly discards 1 card in their their hand.-Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower monster from your hand or Graveyard.-1 other monster on your side of the gains 800 ATK.During the End Phase of the turn this card Synchro Summoned it is returned to your Extra Deck and you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "The One Who Sets The Flame, Kouen" from your Graveyard, ignoring the summoning conditions. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. If this card is in your hand while you have 5 or more cards in your hand you can discard your entire hand to remove from play this card, if this card is removed from play by its own effect it is Special Summoned to your side of the field during your next Stand By Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect draw 2 cards from your Deck.Once per turn you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Gatherer of The Materials, Kaishi" from your Graveyard. This card can only be used as a synchro material monster for a DARK attribute synchro monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set this card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by the effect of "The One Who Sets The Flame, Kouen". If this card is in your hand you can send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to send this card to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card from your Deck. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Sumizome Token"(Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 500). If this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon it's returned to your Deck then you send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard, if this card would be sent to the Graveyard this way it is sent to the bottom of your Deck. ^Father Wolf's Image^ What Do you think? Positive Criticism is greatly wanted! How do the two new cards affect it fluidity? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Change can not to cannot. I don't think you need the "This card can not be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon." part but I'm uncertain. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Change can not to cannot. I don't think you need the "This card can not be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon." part but I'm uncertain. 9.5/10In bold: I can put that there, if I only want it to be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon, otherwise it could be Special Summoned from the Graveyard and the removed from play area. Thanks for the word fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Oh I see what you mean now. Thanks for clearing that up. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BanishedZaber Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Wow... squinting required. Anyways, I love the picture and name, very creative. As far as the effect goes, I'm a big fan of cards with "option" effects like this. The card isn't overpowered, but it feels "under-useful". With such a high cost to play it (a level 11 tuning), the fact that it can only use one ability and gets blasted back to the deck after just one turn makes it very impractical in most situations. Maybe if you removed that effect? After all, the number of times it can use it's abilities is slowed down by the 4 monster removal, and 3200 ATK is perfectly reasonable for Level 11. Overall, a good effort. 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Wonderful..... any OP'edness is countered by its last effect 7.999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 it's quite balanced out, pic looks very good too, shame it's not also treated as a FIRE attribute 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 UPDATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 is it the Kaishi card? That one's effect looks a bit too powerful for mere lv2 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Nice, I like the long effects, they look cool. Decent pics, too. The One Who Sets the Flame, Kouen, has a cool effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 is it the Kaishi card? That one's effect looks a bit too powerful for mere lv2 8/10 What would you recommend that I do for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Spoilerwhoring... ew...Unspoiler them, and I'll give you a detailed review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 is it the Kaishi card? That one's effect looks a bit too powerful for mere lv2 8/10 What would you recommend that I do for it. you can start by raising the lv for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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