Bloodshade Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 well what do you think. any comment is welcomed in hopes of making my card making abilities better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Minor OCG errors. It's very OP. Take the blocking summon effect out And limit the designated Machine-Type monster to be summoned. "A Level 5 or lower"/"with an ATK of 2000 points or less" are such examples. 6.5/10 for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Effect is FAR TOO STRONG. Locks down non-Machine decks. Fixplzkthxbai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Good card for a beginner, though this card is Oped and you have some OCG errors, it's nothing much to worry about. In the future you should use the OCG thread to help yourself and capalize the beginning of your cards. Anyways good for a beginning. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BanishedZaber Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I agree with the above. Remove the block effect and set some sort of restriction on the summoned monster. Good concept otherwise. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
texasgotexas Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 look better i wish this card was real Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 OCG Fix:"When this card is summoned (exclusind Special Summon), you can Special Summon a level 5 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard." Your problem is mainly capitalization. There are a lot of proper nouns in Yu-Gi-OH OCGSP. Secondly, I'd rather get 2 level 2 or 3 or lower Machine-Types than 1 level 5 or lower Machine-Type. Then again, it'd actually be even cooler to have this card be gadget-ish support, so you could say "... 2 level 4 or lower EARTH non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters." but that'd be pretty lengthy. This is all a matter of my opinion, however, on the usefulness of the card. In it's present state, I'd probably use this card to get a Tuner Machine-Type (who is only going to be level 2 or 3) and Synch this guy and the summoned monster off for "Turbo Warrior" or "Nitro Warrior" (just for an example). Interesting card. I recommend editing your first post so that everyone can see your edited card without having to scroll down. Good luck! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 last effect is way too powerful against machine decks, just give a cost for a machine monster to be summoned 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I like the pic the best8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash000 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Great Card! Very well-done. Congratz! 8/10 for sure! Can you rate mine? : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 @Yash: Never post your card on another person's thread this is considered spamming as soon as you get this message delete that card. BOT- Great card, obviously the machine lock has been edited but I like the effect's it seems a little OP If you have dumped a Cyber Dragon into your graveyard you can rettrieve it again, anyways great card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 A little? Dude, that card re-defines BROKEN. And LP confusion, as well. As for the card that the TOPIC is about, I'd say it's pretty well done. I'd change the name to Junkyard Engineer, but that's just me. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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