swimmer117 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 All of the OCG has been corrected. Kudos to blamonchesix and Verebazs2 for the editing. Effect: When this card attacks a face down Defense Position Monster, remove it from play without flipping it face-up. Inflict damage to your opponent's Lifepoints equal to the difference beetween this card's ATK and the destroyed card's DEF. Once per turn, you must discard one Monster Card from your hand to keep this card in play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verebazs2 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 OCG fix I don't know much, but I think it should be something like this:...Inflict damage to your opponent's Lifepoints equal to the difference beetween this card's ATK and the destroyed card's DEF. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 State "Once per turn" on the discard effect.Change "Decrease" to "Inflict Direct Damage"To be honest, there's very little OCG error and your grammar is good. Not a bad card. 9/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 OCG could use help9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 this is just piercing damage basically, with an extra effect, which is relatively good 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Really good card, man! The pic suits the name, your OCG is fine and the effect is balanced.8.5 is my rate for now, if you fix it i change it to 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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