nannn3 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 here s a good card for a machine type deck: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 too many errors, too many posts, too bad :( EPIC FAIL/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr.octagonapus6969 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 infinity-/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 -Misspelled "Electric"-Capitalize Name and Type-If it's a Ritual Monster, where is the Card to Ritual Summon it. And the effect should say that it can only be Summoned by that card.-Underpowered for a Level 4. It should have stats between 1400-1900. For now, it has the stats of a Level 2.-Needs a better effect, more original effect.Overall, 2/10. If you want more help, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 too weird the pic is weird, bad OCG, you can CAP the name, too many erros0/infinity² Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 you misspelled everything(exaggerating)EPIC FAIL/1 yea you need to work on your spellingELECTRICSPECIALand how can you summon the ritual card?post a spell card or edit it's effect until you do that, you have along way to go 'til you perfect this card sorry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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