Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Hey guys! I'm Jamuz Terebellum, or just Jamuz, if you want. I'm a new member here in YCM. I hope i learn a lot here, and maybe in the future, i become a good card maker :PWell, please, rate and comment my card!Mutant Lava Fish [/center][/center][/center][/center] Lava Horse Army http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6153/420627.jpg' alt='420627.jpg'> I'm sorry for the bad OCG, please fix it when you find. Suggests are welcome. =L EDIT: Pics Credit to: -Nightmare -Google Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 without any spell/trap support or effects, it's too weak 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_SuperDude__ Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Nice. I like the pic.The description could be better, but I think its cool.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Thanks guys! I'll fix it.Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 a little better, I still wished you had given the monster an effect though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Changed the monster to an effect monster. Fix the OCG errors, plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 yeah now it looks much better, I'll raise the rate to 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Thanks, ragnarok. Anyother comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Good pic.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkit719 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Fish is good, just seems to weak. And Lava Lake is better. Nice job for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Sry, why is it weak? Maybe i should increase the ATK. or DEF? Thanks for comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Boost the effect to perhaps 700 points, or 500 points? Or let the gained points accumulate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Infernity Tech Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkit719 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Boost the effect to perhaps 700 points' date=' or 500 points? Or let the gained points accumulate?[/quote']Yeah it just seems like people would choose another card because he's only hitting 1300. Maybe 1500 that would help. But anyway its a really cool picture 8/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 UpdaTeD -Please Rate/Comment! Suggests are welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Pics are very good! I don't spek english very well, so, i won't rate the OCG >:[9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Heey thx!Any suggest will be welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 8/10 nice pic and effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thx! Any comment or suggest? If it has any error, plz fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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