Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I've been out of the Yu-gi-oh card making scene for a while (mostly because I ran out of ideas), but I've decided to give it another go. This is the result of my attempt. I'm not even sure it belongs in "Realistic Cards", because there are no real cards that use standard playing cards in their effects (just coins and dice) but I thought it would be pretty cool. Please rate and comment. I also greatly appreciate OCG fixes (i'm really bad at it) and constructive criticism. Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Tribute Summoned except with 3 tributes. During each of your Standby Phases draw the top card from a shuffled standard 52 card deck of playing cards. If the card drawn is an ace you win the duel. If it is a black face card reduce your opponent's Life Points by 2000. If it is a red face card reduce your Life Points by 2000. If it is a numerical spade draw a card. If it is a numerical club your opponent draws a card.If it is a numerical heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200. If it is a numerical diamond, decrease your Life Points by its value x200. After this effect resolves, the drawn card is placed aside and when this effect next activates, draw from the same deck of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 This looks stupid and overpowered. 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 This is stupidly retarded This card doesnt even ride the short bus, its rides the the little van 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I asked for constructive criticism, that doesn't mean just saying it sucks without telling me why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 ok ill tell you whats with the deck of cards thing thats has nothing to do with anything' its the most random thing i have ever seen in a ygo card I mean who has a deck of cards just lying around rite next to them' And its lv 10 with 2200 ATK Remove everything about the deck of cards and drop the level to 6 or maybe 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I personally really like the Idea, though, maybe make it the ace of spades that wins you the duel only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 If you are dedicated to this card, and it is very interesting, I think you should at least free up some time and space by saying this... "If it's a numerical heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200. If it's a numerical diamond, decrease your Life Points by its value x200." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 @cmc1234: If you ran a deck with this card in it, you would obviously keep a deck of playing cards with your Yu-gi-oh stuff. And what makes a deck of cards more random than a dice or a coin? They were used in card effects because pretty much everyone has both of those things. Before any cards that used dice in their effects came out, I doubt many people would have a dice "just lying around rite next to them". The reason its ATK and DEF are much lower than one would expect of such a high level card is because of the power of the effect. Each turn the chance of the controller drawing an ace increases and therefore the opponent would want it gone as soon as possible. The low ATK and DEF make it harder to keep alive for an extended period of time and therefore make the instant win much harder to obtain. @Welche: Thank you.@Stoopid1: That is a good idea. Thank you for that suggestion. I have changed the effect to that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Effect is one of the weirdest I've seen. Which I like. May be slightly overpowered, but 9.2/10 nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thank you Lord Smeagle. I kind of have a habit of most of my cards being at least a little OP'd, ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
multi card maker Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I've been out of the Yu-gi-oh card making scene for a while (mostly because I ran out of ideas)' date=' but I've decided to give it another go. This is the result of my attempt. I'm not even sure it belongs in "Realistic Cards", because there are no real cards that use standard playing cards in their effects (just coins and dice) but I thought it would be pretty cool. Please rate and comment. I also greatly appreciate OCG fixes (i'm really bad at it) and constructive criticism. [img']http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/4739/278331.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Tribute Summoned except with 3 tributes. During each of your Standby Phases draw the top card from a shuffled standard 52 card deck of playing cards. If the card drawn is an ace you win the duel. If it is a black face card reduce your opponent's Life Points by 2000. If it is a red face card reduce your Life Points by 2000. If it is a numerical spade draw a card. If it is a numerical club your opponent draws a card.If it is a numerical heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200. If it is a numerical diamond, decrease your Life Points by its value x200. After this effect resolves, the drawn card is placed aside and when this effect next activates, draw from the same deck of cards.[Your King of aces is very cool./quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Ok I do not get the first two posts. I like the card its an interesting card. It's certainly got an origional effect. The pic is great and overall its just a really good card. 9.5/10 I would give it a perfect 10 but I don't like really long effects. Makes the card seem more fake. (Which really is what this site is about but still I personally thing cards should be more real than fake.) Edit: multi card maker You put your post in the wrong way....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
multi card maker Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 This looks stupid and overpowered. 2/10.[Your cards look great!Especially your chuckles./quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geneth Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I don't get why people are flaming this card. It's incredibly original, and its effect has a chance to backlash and hurt you, as well as win the game. I think the part where you draw any ace to win the duel is a little bit too probable for it to be fair. I would suggest either making 1 ace win the duel, or changing the effect to destroy all cards on your opponent's field or something to that effect. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thank you KurashiDragon and Geneth (I don't really know what was going on in muti card maker's posts, so i'll just ignore him for now). I thought that my card must bad and was a little taken aback by the tiny numbers in their ratings (most of my cards i've bothered to post have gotten, mostly, quite high ratings). I'm glad to see that I was wrong, so to everyone who has posted here (except assanaut and cmc1234 [and maybe multi card maker?]) I would just like to say another thank you, because after the non-constructive critasism, flaming and low ratings I almost got put off making (or at least posting) any more cards, but now I know that would be stupid and so I will continue my efforts to get back on the YGO card creating horse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 To multi card maker, technically what your doing is considered spam, please review the card instead of quoting randomly. As for the card I personally like the Idea. I would make some changes though.[spoiler=OCG Fix]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 monster cards. During each of your Standby Phases draw 1 card from a shuffled standard 52 card deck of playing cards. If the card drawn is an Ace, you win the duel. If the card you drew was a Black Face Card, reduce your opponent's Life Points by 2000. If the card you drew was a Red Face Card, reduce your Life Points by 2000. If the card you drew was a Spade, draw 1 card. If the card you drew was a Club, your opponent draws 1 card. If the card you drew was a Heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200. If the card you drew was a Diamond, decrease your Life Points by its value x200. After this effect resolves, the drawn card is placed aside and when this effect next activates, draw from the same deck of cards. [spoiler=What I would do]This card cannot be destroyed by battle, damage calculation is not applied. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 monster cards. During each of your Standby Phases draw 1 card from a shuffled standard 52 card deck of playing cards. If the card drawn is a Black Ace, Increase your Life Points by 2000 and decrease your opponent's Life Points by 2000. If the card you drew was a Black Face Card, reduce your opponent's Life Points by 2000. If the card you drew was a Red Face Card, reduce your Life Points by 2000. If the card you drew was a Non-Face Card Spade, draw 1 card. If the card you drew was a Non-Face Card Club, your opponent draws 1 card. If the card you drew was a Non-Face Card Heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200. If the card you drew was a Non-Face Card Diamond, decrease your Life Points by its value x200. If the card you drew was a Red Ace, decrease your Life Points by 2000 and increase your opponent's Life Points by 2000. After this effect resolves, the drawn card is placed aside and when this effect next activates, draw from the same deck of cards. I would leave the stars alone since it is reasonable. I also would make the ATK and DEF 0, which is why I added the first effect. Overall as of now 4/10, With the OCG fix 8/10, with my fix 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darker Sephiroth Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 @Magnum: Thanks for the rate and fixes, but there are a few problems I can see with the OCG fix. First you said "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 monster cards.", but I want it's summon to be a Normal Summon, not a Special Summon. I want it to use up that turns normal summon (and not have it trigger effects that are triggered by Special Summons). So could you possibly tell me how to word its summoning conditions with that in mind? ^_^'. Also for the second half of the effect you removed the word numerical from the effect, so if you drew say a King of Hearts, you would lose the 2000 Life Points because its a face card, but you would also gain Life Points because, even though it is a face card it is still a heart and "If the card you drew was a Heart, increase your Life Points by its value x200.". I may be wrong, hell I probably am, because i suck at OCG, but thats just how it seems to me... As for your change to the effect, I actually prefer it the way it is, but thank you for the suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinzo Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 overalll nice card very original. but the idea of carrying more cards around leaves a bad taste in my mouth. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Well its Really Special :D i Like Special 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 among the weirdest effects I've seen, and it should be lv6 given it has only 2200 atk 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Effect is one of the weirdest I've seen. Which I like. May be slightly overpowered' date=' but 9.2/10 nonetheless.[/quote'] THIS!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blablafodfpå Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Rofl xD Funny idea ;) 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 This is....... original, yes that's it!But I don't realy think it's very YGOish.A 8/10, for the originality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Rofl xD Funny idea ;) 7.8/10 Oh yes, NOW I lol.13/10 cos' I lolled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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