King of Wraiths

[Lexadin]

Here are some card's I made in the mood of upcoming Halloween. And yes, I know it's a Vanilla and don't care about that, it's a wall and has support so dont nag about that.

 

Pic: totmoartsstudio2

 

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: - As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a monster would be destroyed by a Spell Card effect, negate the effect and destroy the card.

Pic: namesjames

 

Lore: "Spell Banning Ghoul" + "Spellbound Wraith, Actus"

Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Army of Revenge Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 500). If you do, you cannot Summon any other monster this turn. An "Army of Revenge Token" cannot be used for a Synchro Summon or as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards.

Pic: Wanderley (YCM)

 

Rate/Hate/Fix?

[Hero Neos Wiseman]

Cool 10/10

[Lexadin]

Tnx

[ragnarok1945]

your fusion card could use a little more atk, the rest looks just fine

 

8.5/10

[Lexadin]

Tnx, ragnarok. I've edited.

[Lexadin]

C'mon!

[ragnarok1945]

Tnx' date=' ragnarok. I've edited.

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I was actually thinking somewhere around the 3000 atk mark

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Yeah it should be there to make it better

9.4/10 anyway

[Lexadin]

Really? I thought it would be OP, but if you say so I'll edit.

[Cowboy Dan]

Nice; a Vannila is only good when the creator states that they don't care it's a vannila.

Overall, they all seem balanced.

Cool pics, I feel all Halloweeny inside.

^_^

[Lexadin]

Tnx, it hearing that almost makes me feel like I have a heart :twisted:, nah just kidding I have a heart.

[Big Lez]

Effects are nice...

OCG has some errors..especially your 2nd monster's

 

I really dislike rare Vanillas...

vanillas are commons..and that for a good reason ... there is nothing special about them ^^

 

I dont hate vanillas..just rare ones :D

 

 

..but the card itself and the pic is EPIC...

 

8.5/10

[Lexadin]

I see, and I know I chose it becouse it was and I'm keeping it.

[Max Darkness]

A few of OCG errors to fix (on the fusion mostly). Otherwise, quite normal.

 

8/10

[Lexadin]

I knew it! If someone would be so nice to tell me them? I can fix them.

[Max Darkness]

I knew it! If someone would be so nice to tell me them? I can fix them.

 

Spellbound Wraith' date=' Actus[/b']

 

An ancient king, forever bound to his throne by a malevolent curse. Gaining immortality has only deepened his lust for revenge.

 

So, technically not an OCG fix, but this fixes your English.

 

 

Spell-Banning Ghoul

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: -

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a monster would be destroyed by a Spell Card effect, negate the effect and destroy the card.

 

 

Released Lord Actus

 

"Spell Banning Ghoul" + "Spellbound Wraith, Actus"

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Army of Revenge Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 500). This token cannot be Tributed. If you Special Summon an "Army of Revenge Token", you cannot Summon another monster this turn. Negate the effects of Spell Cards that designate this card.

 

 

One last thought. Perhaps have the tokens have another effect or influence something else. It would make the fusion more interesting.

[Archelaus]

The Pics are great.

FIX for the last card:

Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Army of Revenge Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 500). If you do, you cannot Summon any other monster this turn. An "Army of Revenge Token" cannot be used for a Synchro Summon or as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards.

 

9.2/10

[Lexadin]

I knew it! If someone would be so nice to tell me them? I can fix them.

 

Spellbound Wraith' date=' Actus[/b']

 

An ancient king, forever bound to his throne by a malevolent curse. Gaining immortality has only deepened his lust for revenge.

 

So, technically not an OCG fix, but this fixes your English.

 

 

Spell-Banning Ghoul

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: -

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a monster would be destroyed by a Spell Card effect, negate the effect and destroy the card.

 

 

Released Lord Actus

 

"Spell Banning Ghoul" + "Spellbound Wraith, Actus"

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Army of Revenge Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 500). This token cannot be Tributed. If you Special Summon an "Army of Revenge Token", you cannot Summon another monster this turn. Negate the effects of Spell Cards that designate this card.

 

 

One last thought. Perhaps have the tokens have another effect or influence something else. It would make the fusion more interesting.

 

Tnx for the fix. And I don't really like the wording in the fix of my Vanilla.

And Tnx Archelaus for the OCg fix.

[Lexadin]

Fixed bumb

[GreenMetal]

awesome

[Wanderley]

these cards looks fine

8/10

just want to say that you spell my name wrong^^

[Metal Skull]

Cool cards.

8/10

[Lexadin]

Sorry, I'm doing that a lot lately.

And tnx for the comments.

[Sweet Lightning]

Good cards! Vanillas are great with support. Awesome pics as well. Balanced effects and great OCG. 8/10 :) Very nice.

[Lexadin]

Tnx, I know and I just love to make some story's.