Micky Kingdom Hearts

[mickymousefan1]

PLEASE COMMENT

PLEASE DON"T COMMENT ON FAKE TYPES!

thanks for the help

[Pichu]

nice

[Starly_64]

Apart from the Types (you could've named the characters "Keyblade Warriors..." instead of making fake Types):

-The Mickey Cards, Donald and Goofy need an effect. And in your Summoning conditions in your effects, do not start with "Can only be". The proper Ritual Monster effect is:

"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The World that never Was".", and the effects for the Mickey stages should be "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Kingdom Hearts Mickey LVx".

-Images could be better (especially for Mickey LV5 and 7).

-The stats for LV7 are incredibly overpowered without any drawback effects. Try stats between at least 2500-3000.

-Sora has overpowered stats (Level 4s should have between 1400-1900), and here's a fixed effect:

"When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Keyblade-Type monster, except this card, from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position."

 

Overall, 5/10. These are good for a new user, and if you understand what other people are commenting on and improve your cards, you will make a much better set. Keep it up! If you need any more help, PM me.

[mickymousefan1]

thanks dude

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i fix the cards how r they

[Starly_64]

The effects are much better. You can also add another effect to the cards, but nothing that is going to make them too powerful. Also, you can edit you first post, so you can replace the old cards with your fixed ones.

[Night]

i thought i was going to see some really bad cards but then when i saw them im like "Whoa!! i was right!" lol, yea you'll get better though so keep trying, the only thing i like is "the world that never was" pic, thats a great pic, the others ar not so good.

[twilekmaniac]

I have to admit I've grown tired of spam and bad cards involving Kingdom Hearts but these are some what better. Still you probably need some more practice.

[mickymousefan1]

i thought i was going to see some really bad cards but then when i saw them im like "Whoa!! i was right!" lol' date=' yea you'll get better though so keep trying, the only thing i like is "the world that never was" pic, thats a great pic, the others ar not so good.

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uuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmm

thanks i think:?

[Cowboy Dan]

If I was rash and evil, and spoke my true feelings about these cards, I'd be banned.

But I'm not rash and evil.

Good attempt for a new user.

Try to make longer effects, like the effects in the real Yu-Gi-Oh cards.

Overall 5/10.

(3/10= Idea)

(2/10= Effort)

[mickymousefan1]

If I was rash and evil' date=' and spoke my true feelings about these cards, I'd be banned.

But I'm not rash and evil.

Good attempt for a new user.

Try to make longer effects, like the effects in the real Yu-Gi-Oh cards.

Overall 5/10.

(3/10= Idea)

(2/10= Effort)

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thanks