"Thou shall not Pass"

[Kamanosuke]

 

What do you think of this Card??? Is it OP or somethin like that....

Also are there OCG errors??

 

Comment and rate this Card ^^

 

Edit: i think this should be the right Text ^^

[Amaterasu]

Not bad for a newbie. I'd say 8/10. A little boring and a few OCG errors but still decent.

[Felix]

Grammar and ocg. Fix it.

 

You should phrase the hole thing differently in fact.

 

4/10

[Kamanosuke]

Then tell me where the mistakes are, because im german and my english isnt the best one ^^

[Läufer]

OCG fix:

This card can only be activated if one of your opponent's monsters declare an attack. Inflict 1000 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster you control destroyed by battle this turn.

 

Basic. 5/10

[Felix]

OCG fix:

This card can only be activated if one of your opponent's monsters declare an attack. Inflict 1000 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Basic. 5/10

 

That's not the card's effect. Any monster of yours destroyed after the cards activation is an extra 1000 damage to your opponent.

[賢狼ホロ]

"This card can only be activated when your opponent declares an attack. Inflict 1000 points of direct damage for each monster your opponent destroys on your side of the field. During your opponents End Phase destroy this card."

 

Perhaps?

[Läufer]

fix'd.

Still 5/10

[Casmy]

7.5/10