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2000 post Celebration!!!! [~Fallen Soul~]


Necro Pheonix

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Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK monsters you control, or by its own effect. If you Special Summon this monster, you cannot Normal Summon or Set a monster during the same turn. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if a DARK monster is destroyed by battle, you can reduce this card's ATK by 500 to add the destroyed monster to your hand. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 additional card. If the card is a Monster Card, you can show the card to your opponent to draw a second card. If the drawn card(s) is a Spell or Trap Card, Set it on your side of the field. If you cannot, discard your hand. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, destroy all cards your opponent controls. If you call it wrong, destroy all monsters you control. If you activate this effect, you must skip your Battle Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can role a six-sided die. -1: Destroy this card. -2: Pay 1000 Life Points. -3: Remove 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. -4: Remove 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard from play. -5: Your opponent loses 1000 Life Points. -6: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by its own effect, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position.

 

With thanks to Max Darkness for an OCG fix

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The OCG is very good. Not perfect, and I won't get into those imperfections as its already been fixed, but Max Darkness appears to have a great understanding of OCG.

 

All in all, it's an amalgamation of optional effects with high risk factors but the potential to be extremely beneficial with no drawbacks, except the single extra draw, which is just a highly beneficial effect. The double extra draw, by contrast, isn't that beneficial with a heavy, heavy risk. Drawbacks are much better for the game than huge potential for those who're lucky, which's just outright bad for the game.

 

So yeah, next time, use drawbacks instead of luck-based risk factors for superpowered effects if you don't want to damage the game. ^_^

 

Your circulation was made into block capitals, which doesn't work for 1st Edition cards in the real game. Use LIMITED EDITION or nothing. "EN" should be at the start of the suffix, and you should have a 4 character prefix and 3 characters after "EN" in the suffix.

 

I'm thinking this is too much of a boss monster to be a Super Rare, much less a Common. Go for Ultra.

 

A valiant effort, fix what you can and it'll be even more so. =)

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