keenens the man Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROY Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 A few OCG fixes are required, but for the first one why don't you just say they gain 200 ATK every turn instead of 400ATK every two turns. Also for the last card it is very under powered for a God. ~4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 PIcs are bad imo. Effects are bad. need mroe and need to be more creative. NO Fake-Types. Fire=Pyro. OCG needs work but if post the Effec i will fix the OCG for you =3 ~3/10~ All in all these need some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 PIcs are bad imo. Effects are bad. need mroe and need to be more creative. NO Fake-Types. Fire=Pyro. OCG needs work but if post the Effec i will fix the OCG for you =3 ~4/10~ All in all these need some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 These cards have terrible OCG and their effects are extremely basic. The second card has a relatively high ATK for a monster that only requires 1 tribute. Nice attempt at making cards, but their just not quite good enough. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 change demon to field, fire to pyro All the effects are dull anyway 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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