Anubis05 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Hi evry one , i created some cards i want you to check :) Effect:When you would take effect damage, switch the effect damage to your opponent's Life Points instead.During each of your Standby Phases, put 1 counter on this card.When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the number of counters x 500 points. I didnt know how to write this card very well.I wanted it to negate any damage exept battle damage,but i want it to work in a different way than spell of pain or barrel behind the door, because those cards cant swich the damage of for example, graberobber, and my card is suposed to do that also. Effect:Destroy 1 monster on your side of the field and take damage equal to its ATK.Draw 2 cards.i don't like the image of sacrifice draw very much, but is the best i found.I had a great picture for it but i couldn't make it fit in the card. Tribute 1 monster.Special Summon 2 "Half Soul Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK ?/DEF ?) in Attack Position.The ATK and DEF of a "Half Soul Token" is equal to half of the ATK and DEF of the Tributed monster.(Iwill change the effect so the tokens can only be tributed for a tribute summon of a fiend-Type monster, or by a card effect/cost .) Hope you like them and please me help with the OCG.Cya :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OCG errors aside, you should put some restrictions on the Soul Division tokens 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 no one else??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 What Ragnarok said... I like the pics epecially the last one but the second one kinda creeps me out @-@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Thanks :), but what about the effects?? i need to know what do you think about them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Well i quit card making along time ago so i don't usually rate the effects, but... Curse Reflection:Very unique, never seen an effect like it ^.^ Sacrifice Draw:Simple yet usfull ^.^ Soul Division:You should probably make it say that the tokens can't attack, if you tribute a strong monster your opponent is f***ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Ok thanks you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OCG errors6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OCG errors, Soul Division is kinda OP'd.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 thank you , tell me please where are the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 can you post the effects, then I'll rate them and fix the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 They are readable but ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 BUMP ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 That's a very good effect but it could use an increase in the damage you can take from tokens to like 700 since all damage goes directly to your opponent's life points. There are OCG errors. Overall, it's a great card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis05 Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 BUMP!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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