aznrice Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Thanks you for all the positive comments I have gotten for my previous card, I feel like a part of this community now :D. Anyways, I felt like making two new cards, the first card I had a little trouble on, since I could not find any cards with a similar effect. The second card was made to work with my first card "Luna Spiritus" since people said it took too long to activate the effect :D. Lore: You and your Opponent both draw a random card from their Graveyards. If it is a Spell or Trap card, discard it. The Monster with the highest level attack is then Special Summoned to their owner's side of the field. The loser takes 1000 damage to their Life Points.Picture by Deltorafann001 of DeviantArt Picture by fuocogotico of DeviantArt Yes, I am aware that I am horrible at OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Land on the other side's effect is a little dull, but I guess balanced out Both cards have OCG errors, but that's expected since you're new, so use the OCG thread to help you 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OCG fixes anyone? =D Awakening"You and your opponent may pick up a card from their respective Graveyard. If you or your opponent picked up a Monster card, the one who picked up a monster whose ATK is greater than the other's may inflict 1000 damage to the other. If you or your opponent picked up a Spell or Trap card, you/your opponent may discard it." The land on the other side"All Zombie-Type monsters decrease their ATK and DEF by 300. Zombie-Type monsters cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is still normally applied.)" Hope that helps. Original effects as always, it's wild OCG fixing but that's fun. I'm no expert, may someone more experienced correct me if I need to be! EDIT: 9/10 for Awakening, 7/10 for The land on the other side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aznrice Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Thank you, I'll make sure to read it before I make another card. Awakening"You and your opponent may pick up a card from their respective Graveyard. If you or your opponent picked up a Monster card, the one who picked up a monster whose ATK is greater than the other's may inflict 1000 damage to the other. If you or your opponent picked up a Spell or Trap card, you/your opponent may discard it." You forgot the Special Summon part :P, but this looks way better than mine. The land on the other side"All Zombie-Type monsters decrease their ATK and DEF by 300. Zombie-Type monsters cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is still normally applied.)" GAH! that's the word I was looking for (decrease). Also (Didn't know you have to put TYPE after.) Thanks :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Thank you' date=' I'll make sure to read it before I make another card.[/quote'] Drop me a PM or a message on MSN if you want me to take a peek at your OCG before you post it, I'll try helping you my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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