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[spoiler=The Story]Sparta is in chaos. a powerful sorcerer has sided with a corrupted demi-god, and its up to the spartans to destroy them. one spartan quicly rose to the position of commander. his name was Velok. but something was not right. all around sparta, people were mysteriously dissapearing, and then appearing in the dark alliances army.

the dark alliance must be stopped.

[spoiler=application]Name of character:

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[spoiler=my application]Name Of Character: Velok

Appearance: 30skosl.png

Bio: this very powerful mercenary was called to be in the army from a large village outside sparta. he quickly rose to commander, and was well respected around the area.

[spoiler=members of the RP]Velok - Commander - Me

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Urm... Maybe you shall change the story a little bit...?

 

+Give the country another name (sparta sounds so... rpg harming...)

+Tell us where we shall start (Are we part of the army, or just villagers? Or both oO?)

+If you manage it to get like "Lord of the Rings" certainly more people would give it a look

 

But thats just my opinion...

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