Baltoli Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Here is the first set I've ever done.I'm kinda a perfectionist, so let me know if any of the card lore is wrong.I'd like all comments, good or bad, but only sensible ones.E.g. Good Comment: "The card lore on ... is wrong. It should be ... I think you missed that." or similar. Bad Comment: "Lol noob ... is WRONG!" or similar. Thanks, Baltoli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Lol noob ... is WRONG! ^I'm kidding, dude^ Now, what should I say, oh yeah, AHEM: DON'T F****** ATTACH YOUR CARDS!!!Post the IMG code.(Get the IMG code by clicking your finished card.)Anyway, effects, eh, not great OCG. Pics are decent, except for the one with the white BG. I'll give it... 4.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Here are the cards now.Hope you like 'em! :D OCG hints welcome. Oh yeah, and can someone tell me how to do that pop-up thing so I don't have a pile of 21 cards at once? :? Thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 don't make Divine types or attributes the OCG is surprisingly good for someone new, so I'll give it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Ok, thanks! I'll change them to Light warriors or dragons.And change the image for Ra Incarnate because it really is awful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 The updated cards are now there. Replies please??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 ok, I guess I can raise the rate to 8.2/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I'm not really seeing how any of them are holy; quite the opposite feel, actually. But the cards are nevertheless good for a new member. 7.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Just edit your first post and put the cards on it. Pics are good, but the synchros needs bg. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cluster Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Good 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Thanks everybody. Lord Smeagle: Some of them were Divine-Beasts with support, with some negatives in the form of those Lords. But I was told to change some of those. I had no idea these were so good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Try to fing better pics. preferably ones with backgrounds. Some effects need to be tweaked. control of this card cannot be switched is somewhat bland. Add some more to it. Not bad for a newbie. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Thanks for your feedback, Blooddragon. For the beasts I tried to make them almost an opposite effect to what the Lords do. I'll try to find different images.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 the summoning of your trump cards is too strongly resting on "Dark Priest". To have a chance of pulling off a Deck with this strategy effectively, you'd need at least double the number of allowed cards in a deck (so 6 or more). I recommend, actually, that you do that. Give "Dark Priest" an effect that reads something like "You can have 5 copies of this card in you Deck." and then take his stats down to below 1000. That'd be awesomesauce. I'll come back and check these guys out again when/if I have time. Good luck! Warm Regards,:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Thanks for your comments. I think the three Lords are powerful enough to warrant that difficulty in summoning. You can use sangan, witch or deep diver to get them out of your deck when you have one of the three symbols. Or you could use dark ascencion to summon dark mage. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linkisthebest7 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I like them, but found some a bit bland, especially the sycros. I don't have anything to say that someone else hasn't said already, but good job. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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