~Vampiress~ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 this is mah first go but... trying to improve so comments/criticism is welcome :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
victorydragon Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 not the strongest card, but its good for your first go Tip: You should have made that card a fiend type because its a a demon because its your first go i will give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 ok i willthnx for the rating :)is this better??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Is it me or is the card not showing up on anyone elses computer also? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 it's a simple but useful effect, and still can be used on synchros so it's balanced out 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 thnxand matrix, i can see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 It's balanced, decent effect. Pic is good too. 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 thnx :Dto make it 10/10??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 You need all the stats for a token. laid out like this. actually Imma fix the OCG for ya. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Demon Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) in Defense Position. "Demon Token"s cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon. there ya go. pretty good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 donebetter??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Lost the Colons, and throw in a space instead. (ATK 1000/DEF 1000) not (ATK:1000/DEF:1000) yu-gi-oh is too good for colons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Simplicity is key. I like the pic and the effect looks alright.8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Sipmpkle but effective effect.There are soe minor OCG errors like: "/ATK 1000" (No ":"), one=1 and " "Demon Token" " (Put "'s around them)A 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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