theultimatevampire Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Welcome to the forums! I hope you enjoy it here. As for the card:-The image is already used for a card, and it is slightly blurred. Try to post an image that is original.-The effect is extremely rare to occur, but it is your first card.-Fixed effect:"Activate this card if your opponent activates the effect of "Exodia the Forbidden One" in his/her hand. Negate the effect, and you win the Duel." Overall, 5/10, just because this is your first card. Learn from what users comment on, and you will make much better cards. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theultimatevampire Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Kind of made it in a hurry I'll try better on the next card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 way op'ed about the winning part, it makes it sound noobish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theultimatevampire Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 It's just a fun card man don't take it so seriusly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotsasuma Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Yeah, all you need to change is the effect so it becomes what Starly said and if your going to use the same pic try to find a non-blurry one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theultimatevampire Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 This is kind of a ruff draft type thing I'm looking for a better pic that is not spellbinding circle and I am going to change the text. I'm working on a new series but I need to know the rules on cussing it's not considered bad if it's a reference to a place, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 isnt that spellbinding circle???5/10like ur username though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 one problem with it the pic s spellbinding circle just look up somehting like alchem cirle for a better pic and fo da record no offense in all but u notz da ultimate vampire dats me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theultimatevampire Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Thanks I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Spellbinding Circle? :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Welcome to the forums! I hope you enjoy it here. As for the card:-The image is already used for a card' date=' and it is slightly blurred. Try to post an image that is original.-The effect is extremely rare to occur, but it is your first card.-Fixed effect:"Activate this card if your opponent activates the effect of "Exodia the Forbidden One" in his/her hand. Negate the effect, and you win the Duel." Overall, 5/10, just because this is your first card. Learn from what users comment on, and you will make much better cards. Keep it up![/quote']This................ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexstrasza Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 OCG Corrections (changes in Bold) Activate this card when your opponent activates 'Exodia the Forbidden One', negate the effect. When you activate this card, you are declared the winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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