Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OMG this OCG is confusing... I think im getting better though. I have made a 2nd one, any better? Please RatePlease correct if i have got it wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 OCG/Grammar Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by discarding 1 card from you hand. Well, pretty UP(Underpowered) and very bland effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Noooooo. You;re still not doing it right! Here let me help: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card from your hand. There. That's the correct way. You're steadily improving. Though it's still not very creative... 4/10 @Namo It is not UP. It's just a weaker version of The Tricky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 thx (vote on poll plz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 (Edit: Woohoo barely beat me to it) You're getting much closer. One of the hard parts is knowing which words are always capitalized and which are not. This is the right way, and ya, I have no idea why they don't capitalize the word "hand", when they do write words like "Deck" and "Graveyard" This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 card from your hand. One thing tho about Namo's post... "can only be Special Summoned by" and "cannot be Special Summoned except by" are actually two different effects, and it does matter which one of them is used. The one you choose is up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 :s Im gonna cryit's getting scary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 One thing tho about Namo's post... "can only be Special Summoned by" and "cannot be Special Summoned except by" are actually two different effects' date=' and it does matter which one of them is used. The one you choose is up to you.[/quote'] Eh HEM!Thank you for your attention, they may be different, but if you want it to be able to be Special Summoned by cards such as monster reborn, you can put "You can Special Summon this card by discarding 1 card from your hand"What you stated, when used in the same card effect, it's like JD, it can only be summoned by it's own effect which is only Special Summoned from the hand, JD cant be Special Summoned with cards such as Monster Reborn And the correct term is "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by...ect" must be used if it can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. END OF STORY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 :s Im gonna cryit's getting scary Why? Except for exact capitalization, you were only 1 word away from the card being correct. You should see how retarded some people's cards can be. There's plenty of em on a daily basis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Woop someone on my team ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Why? except for exact capitalization' date=' you were [b']like 6 words[/b] away from the card being correct. You should see how retarded some people's cards can be. There's plenty of em on a daily basis. fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 acctually compared to what the other guys said if i changed 3 words and removed 1 then it'd be perfect.anything wrong with 2nd card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Why? except for exact capitalization' date=' you were [b']like 6 words[/b] away from the card being correct. You should see how retarded some people's cards can be. There's plenty of em on a daily basis. fixed I don't wanna fight, but what are you talking about? The only word he forgot to write was "Special"... the card maker changed the card, and the way it is written right now is perfect OCG, and is only 1 word different from the way it was before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 i still have the original should i post i aswell? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 card 1 is basically like The Tricky's effect, so it's uncreative 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted September 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 sorry for my card being like the what, 80,000 cards konami have made its like the simpsons theyve done everything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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