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JamesWebb

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It's not too bad, the picture looks okay. The name of the card looks too bland though, if you want I can find you name ideas (just send me a PM so I don't forget).

 

The effect is basically Maju Garzett's with a bit poorer OCG so it's nothing original either. I would suggest finding another effect.

 

It's an okay card all in all, I just don't have the feeling I'm seeing something new at all. 5/10.

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It's not too bad' date=' the picture looks okay. The name of the card looks too bland though, if you want I can find you name ideas (just send me a PM so I don't forget).

 

The effect is basically Maju Garzett's with a bit poorer OCG so it's nothing original either. I would suggest finding another effect.

 

It's an okay card all in all, I just don't have the feeling I'm seeing something new at all. 5/10.

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Agreed. It's too much like Maju Garzett.

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Don't make it a tuner monster because tuners are suppose to be low level monsters. Change the effect up a bit to add more flair like:

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 2 face-up Dragon type monsters. This cards ATK becomes the combined ATK of the two Tributed monsters.

 

Then add a drawback like having his DEF always be 0 and that he is switched to Defense Position everytime he destroys a monster.

 

IDK thats what I would do to make it a lil more interesting. But honestly the picture doesn't match the effect. Good pic though but overused and alot of people will disregard your card for that reason which is sad to say.

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