Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 out of all the sets I've made so far, this is my favorite. please tell me what you think. 0[spoiler=lore]1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-tuner monstersThis card gain 200 ATK and DEF for every "Sword Saint", "Swordgirl", "Grim, the Wanderer" and "Necrim, the Weapon Master" in the Graveyard. During the Battle Phase, negate the effects of all cards, except "Sword Saint" cards, "Grim, the Wanderer" , or "Necrim, the Weapon Master". When this card battles, select 1 card in your Graveyard, or 1 of your removed from play cards, and place it in your deck and shuffle your deck. (picture was drawn by a friend and colored by me.)1234567891011121314151617 [spoiler=a set that goes with the sword saints] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 OCG errors, some very bland effects, can't read the first card's effect, I expected more. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 harsh, but whatever. thank you. BTW what OCG errors did you see? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 fortunately most of the simple effects are technically suited to their low levels, but I still wish you had given them more 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I'm unsure at the moment, you can figure that out yourself For example Maxwell the Swordsmaster Saint definately needs more effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I was thinking of having him be able to search the deck for equip spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 that could be a start, so just go with that for the others in terms of idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 okay, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 In retrospect I WAS surprised about this set, most of your other sets I've rated much higher than this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 [spoiler=Here are your OCG Fixes]Edge The Sword Saint Dragon An idea would be to have the "Swordgirl" set, "Grim, The Wanderer" and "Necron, The Dark Soul" all also treated as "Sword Saint" monsters while face-up on the field. That way, a lot of your effects become a lot simpler and less bulky. 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-tuner monstersThis card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every "Sword Saint" (Taking my recommendation into account) monster in your Graveyard. During your Battle Phase, negate the effects of all face-up Spell, Trap and Effect Monster Cards, except "Sword Saint" cards. When this card battles, select 1 card in your Graveyard or removed from play pile and add it to your Deck. Ezekiel When this card battles, you can discard 1 card to draw 1 card from your Deck. Lucas When this card battles, you can pay 500 Life Points to add 1 "Sword Saint" monster to your hand from your Deck. Jonathan That's the correct spelling. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 300 ATK and DEF during your End Phase. Jacob This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card loses 500 ATK during your End Phase. Any Battle Damage this card's controller's opponent takes is reduced to 0. Blessing of Protection As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when your opponent designates a non-"Sword Saint" monster you control as an attack target, you can switch it to a "Sword Saint" monster you control. Alexander When a "Sword Saint" monster you control would be destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card. If you do, it is not. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Nicholas Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Sword Saint" monster from your Graveyard, except "Necros, The Dark Soul". Monsters Summoned by this effect have their effect(s) negated. David If this card attacks an opponent's monster, inflict 500 damage to your opponent during your End Phase. This one is overpowered, reduce the burn slightly to 300. Daniel If this card attacks an opponent's monster, you can pay 1000 Life Points during your End Phase to destroy 1 face-up card on the field. Matthew If this card attacks an opponent's monster, you can add 1 Spell Card to your hand from your Deck. If you do, the added Spell Card cannot be activated until your next Draw Phase. Maxwell You can equip Equip Spell Cards to this card ignoring the equipping conditions. Sword Saint's Resolve As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Sword Saint" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Any monster that battles a "Sword Saint" monster loses 500 ATK during the End Phase. Overpowered. Add a cost, activation conditions or a destructive effect. Joshua If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster for the Synchro Summon of a Dragon-Type Synchro Monster, each time the Summoned monster attacks an opponent's monster, draw 1 card. Overpowered. Reduce the ATK and DEF. Blake If you control a face-up Tuner Monster, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. Sword of Souls Equip only to a "Sword Saint" monster you control, except "Necron, The Dark Soul". After activation, remove 1 "Sword Saint" monster in your Graveyard from play. The equipped monster gains that monster's effect(s)[/b]. Joseph When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, gain 800 Life Points. Changed effect slightly to balance it. Sword Saints' Aura Correct spelling given above. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of Spell, Trap and Effect Monster Cards that would destroy a "Sword Saint" monster(s) you control. Overall, a lot of these effects are too similar, plus bland. Make them more distinctive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 well the other two sets you looked at were mostly cute girls. anyway I'm working on the cards and will get the edited versions up as soon as I can. Max darkness- I can change grim to be treated as a sword saint, but I can't change the Swordgirls since it isn't my set. also most of your OCG "corrections" are wrong. I did mean for their effects to activate when they battle, and they would activate at the end of the damage step, not the end phase. plus there are other things that you changed that I meant to be that way. I do thank you, and I will fix the ones that are mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grim the Wanderer Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 better 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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