Dweller of Parables Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Tempted me to know where I was closing inA voice behind the door, inviting me inThe portrait on the wall is staring at meHis eyes tell me that he was looking at meShivers start to run up and down my backI'm in anticipation of an attackA feeling of regret have washed over meCould it be that someone's coming for me? Now is the time to escape and get out of this mysteryWhether it's real or fantasy, I've just got to go.Got to get out, got to find a way to get, get out of here.From this place of horror and terror. Gotta find the way to get, get out of here.There is no room for mistake or errorGotta find a way to get, get out hereFrom this place of horror and terror Gotta find a way to get out nowBefore this becomes my final nightmare We discuss insomnia, temptation, fear, and no luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 inb4poetrythread Sounds like acute paranoia to me. Of course, for the past couple of weeks, I've been playing a bunch of campus wide games that run on paranoia and nerf guns... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 inb4 zombie kids vs. human college kids Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 da funk are you talkin bout Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I loved this part. Gotta find the way to get, get out of here.There is no room for mistake or errorGotta find a way to get, get out hereFrom this place of horror and terror Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I'v had on problem with good old lady luck, as for insomnia, thats where I go down hill. In life Temptation is one of my best weapons.Fear, is something we all have and need, or else society would fall into total chaos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 inb4 zombie kids vs. human college kids Moved on to Assassins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 inb4poetrythread Well played, OMGAKITTY. It's a deep "poem". But you can't really rhyme a word with the same word. It kind of breaks the flow and makes it sound choppy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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