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~// Zakk W. //~

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[align=center]Hi people,

 

This is my very first card. I must admit ¤Sun Rise¤ helped me a bit on this one. He learned me how to make cards ^^ So here's my first card, Ho-Oh:

 

 

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This monster can also be Tribute Summoned by removing from play 3 Level 4 or lower FIRE monsters in your Deck. You must then shuffle your Deck. If you do so, you can also treat this monster's Attribute as WIND, WATER or DARK. You can then search your Deck for an Equip Spell Card that has the effect to increase the ATK and/or DEF of a monster of one of those Attributes. If this monster is chosen as a target for the effect of a Monster Card controlled by your opponent, you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect. If you do so, your opponent can then draw 1 card from the top of his/her Deck.

 

 

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This monster can also be Tribut Summoned by Tributing 3 LIGHT monsters you control. If you do so, you can search your Deck for a Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster and Special Summon it. If this monster is removed from play by the effect of a DARK monster your opponent controls, it is immediately removed from play. You must then remove from play all ''Great Phoenix - Ho-Oh'' in your Graveyard. If there are no ''Great Phoenix - Ho-Oh'' in your Graveyard, you lose 200 Life Points for each DARK monsters in your opponent's Graveyard.[/align]

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This monster can also be Tribute Summoned by removing from play 3 Level 4 or lower FIRE monsters from your Deck. You must then shuffle your DeckNOT NEEDED. If you do so, you can also treat this monster's Attribute as WIND, WATER or DARK. You can then search your Deck for an Equip Spell Card that has the effect to increase the ATK and/or DEF of a monster of one of those Attributes. If this monster is chosen as a target for the effect of a Monster Card controlled by your opponent, you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect. If you do so, your opponent can then draw 1 card from the top of his/her Deck.

 

 

Think that's it, but too tired to look comlpetely through, good work.

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Wow thanks a lot people I appreciate it ^^

And yeah' date=' sorry for the ''Grammar fail'', I am, as ¤Sun Rise¤, a Canadian Francophone so I'm not 100% bilingual :S

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Sois le bienvenu sur YCM, alors.

Very good card otherwise, everything has been said on OCG fixing so I can't say much more. For a first card, it's impressive indeed. 9/10 and keep going!

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Wow thanks a lot people I appreciate it ^^

And yeah' date=' sorry for the ''Grammar fail'', I am, as ¤Sun Rise¤, a Canadian Francophone so I'm not 100% bilingual :S

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Sois le bienvenu sur YCM, alors.

Very good card otherwise, everything has been said on OCG fixing so I can't say much more. For a first card, it's impressive indeed. 9/10 and keep going!

 

Wow merci!! ^^

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