*Destiny* Set *INCOMPLETE*

[DDPULP]

This is my first set, so don't be like (O man these cards suck) but im up for any help, also im looking for some more for the set so you can post your own cards and i may put them in the set

(Must have destiny in its name if monster , Have Id DES-ENXXX, Following on from the sets ends.)

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[DDPULP]

I couldn't post alll of them mi coms screwing up

 

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[Bloodrun]

your first card should have these things change:

Normal Summoned, needs to be capitalized, and set should be switched to Flip Summoned. when you list the ritual spell, it should be in "parenthesis". opponent's needs the ' before the s, and its Battle Phase.

your second card: level stars, doesnt need to be capitlaized.

third card: should probably be switched 1 Spell or Trap card on the field

your forth card: needs one more level

your fifht card: Summon shuld be capitalized, Life Points should be to, and Deck, opponent's should the ' before the s

your sixth card: is good

your seventh card: Summon has to be capitalized, and it should be Defense Position Monster

your eigth card: is good

your ninth card: should be monsters cannot be destroyed as a result of batttle, while this card is face-up on the field, Summon and Graveyard should be capitalized, and it should be, his/her Graveyard or hand, equal to or lower then the attacking monster level to the field, and switch the target to this card.

your tenth card: is good

your 11th card: is good

12th: is good

13th: is good

14th: Destiny shuld be like this "Destiny", and Graveyard needs to be capitalized, and its ATK and DEF

15th: it should be, (Effects are not activated)

16th: is good

17th: should be:

this card can only be activated when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster.

18th: it shuld be ATK, and Summoned needs to be capitalized, opponent's needs the ' before the s

19th: it shuld be:

destroy 1 Spell or Trap card during your Damage Step.

20th: opponent's needs the ' before the s

21: is the same card as the 20th

22: is good

23: it should be:

your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand, is he/she cannot, they must pay 300 Life Points....

24th: is good

omg this took forever!! lol ok the order of the cards from the first row the end goes like this:

1,2,3,4,5, (next row)

6,7,8,9,10 (next)

11,12,13,14,15, (next)

16,17,18,19,20 (next)

21,22,23,24,25,26 do you get what imsaying, and then lasttely, my final rating is 10/10, =) you did really good, lol, keep up the good work 8)

[Instinct]

wow, awesome cards!

just a few ocg errors but still good!

4.5/5

[RestLess-BoTics]

Cool cards!

[DDPULP]

Thanx for correctly EVER card that needed it ae...The last thing i want is heaps of posts on little things

[aztex]

Need some OCG working! But their good though! 9/10

[Bloodrun]

Thanx for correctly EVER card that needed it ae...The last thing i want is heaps of posts on little things

 

lol no problem, took a little while, but hey, thought i woul be nice =)