The Dark One Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Well, they might be on the cheap side, but I tried to balance the cards out. [attachment=15131][attachment=15130][attachment=15142][attachment=15143][attachment=15129][attachment=15140][attachment=15132][attachment=15138][attachment=15145][attachment=15133][attachment=15139][attachment=15144] [attachment=15137][attachment=15135][attachment=15136] [attachment=15134][attachment=15141] So... What do you think? More are to come, of course. (I will take any suggestions for cards in this theme.) Ohh, and how do I post the entire image blown up? I could only get thumbnails. #3 Fixed. More added, I didn't like the pictures for Rishka's Scream, Errin's Whisper, and Zaida's Laugh, so I'll probably try to find new ones, but tell me what you think of them. More added. The Princesses, and The Bride, + her Fusion Magic. EDIT: This post was bumped, so I might as well put up some of the new cards of the set. Deathwing and the Sentinel are new. I decided to replace Zaida's art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 ok your first card: no errors2n: no errors3rd: it should be:If "the Dark One" is not face-up on the field while this card is in play, destroy this card.4th: is good, wow im so glad you only had four cards for me to obcerve lol, and only one had problems that is amazing!! lolmy final rating is 10/10 =) keep up the good work 8) oh and for the images, save the picutres as .jpg onto your computercreate a photobucket.com accountupload the photos on photobucketunderneath the photo after it is uploaded, there is a link called IMG, copy and paste that link into the thread, and yu have your image =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Thanks! I'll be fixing that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 wow, pretty good actually =D4.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Thanks! I'll be fixing that now. lol no prablamo =) gald i could be of assistance 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 More added. The field spell, the Queens, and their search spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 I just added "The Dark One's Blade". Comment's? Too good? Not strong enough considering its limitations? Anyone have anything else to say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 wow. very nicely done. rishka and rishka;s scream are a bit bloody for younger children though. excellent art, although the "Dark One" could be better art-wise. I love Acolyte! Too cool. Just in your Ritual Spell you forgot to add how many starts are needed. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Thanks. And I was planning on changing Rishka's Scream at some point anyway, as it looks to gritty for Yugioh, which has a more cartoonish style. Also, I didn't forget the star requirements on "Dark Resurrection Ritual". Do you mean on "The Dark One" itself? I didn't think you put the star requirements on the Ritual Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 I changed the Queens to 6-stars and lowered their attacks, as they seemed too costly to get on the field considering that their effects only kick in when "The Dark One" is in play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 actually you did forget your text just says equal to...... it should be: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "The Dark One". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand." I hope that helped. Please check out my set-the Fathoms of the Deep...thanks! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Some OCG mistakes but thats ok, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Card Maker Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Cheap? Thats pretty cool! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Ah, that's what you meant. OK then, I'll probably fix that in a minute, and put it up with my latest additions to the set. Any Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 ok your fifth card, Deck, needs to be capitalized.sixth: Deck, needs to be cap'dseventh: Deck again needs to be cap'd and yeah you need a better piceigth: good =)ninth: good =)tenth: good =)eleventh: good =)12th: good =)rating for all, 9/10 =) keep up the good work 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 to make your images visible, just save them on your computer. then go to photobucket, register, upload them, and copy the option for forums into your messages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I've made some new cards for the set, but it's late, so I'll post them tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I updated with the Princesses and The Dark One's Bride. As well as made a few fixes. Check them out and see what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark One Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Ratings and comments please. Very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 eh.....8/10?some of the cards..... i dunno what to say.... The effect of the dark one is too long.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Briton of Rose Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Very well done. No complaints, I give it 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackluster_soldier Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 nice cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 I was surprised to see you said i was rude on my rating thing, i myself am never rude, i only tell the truth, no matter how bad it may be, and it is better to tell the harsh truth then to lie to ppl and encourage them with making their shoddy cards ^_^ Anyway on topic, i feel your cards are very good indeed ^_^ i hope ya make some more ^_^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 these are cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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